I've read other reviewers asking why Tyler so possesive, people who start their relationships in questionable situations ie sleeping or trying to get with someone while their with someone else, will question that person integrity because if the can leave that partner to be with them they can do it again
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 06:19 pm
Kayla is sooooo annoying I find it hard to like her, pls the fact that its hard to root for the couple because of the disregard they showed when they first got together (to me its still cheating). The secondary story of the murder case and trial was actually a better story and the main reason why I continued to read.
I dont think it was the author intention, in fact I'm almost sure the she never meant it to be, but Kayla comes across as a hot gettho mess!! She comes across a a pretty dumb chick instead of the educated professional she suppose to be. It took her the whole story to find she was pregnant and since knowing she is she still trying to find clothes that fit her...hiefer just go some maternity wear, your earning a high salary and your man is too..Please!!!
Kayla is just to touchy and irritable for me to like her, she gets upset at the slightest things. Tyler, not to bad but considering how they got together, do they derserve to work??? maybe if Kayla weren't such a annoying chick
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 06:11 pm
What happen to Tyler?
Reviewer: nightseer Signed
[Report This]Date: June 21 2012 02:40 pm
Just when it seems things are back to some form of normal, karma throws another blow. Tyler really needs to work on that jealousy male complex of his.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 01:19 pm
Oh hell tyler! Please do not make a scene! Famous last words of a convicted man! This story has more curves than Beyounce!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 12:47 pm
I agree with the last two chapters. Why is Tyler so possessive all the time. I honestly don't understand. Its seems as if its always the same thing with him and Kayla. His character did not change at all, not even after he the big fight they had after Mike came to Kayla's house.
Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 11:57 am
Okay, please don't take this the wrong way, but I just want to let this out. I really like this story a lot, but honestly I'm getting tired of Tyler and his possessive character. Its always the same thing with him. I taught, and I think that I'm not the only one, that after his and Kayla's broke up, that it will be a wake up call, so that his character can change and grow a little bit. But to my disappointment its still the same. He is possessive all the time, they fight all the time. Nothing is changing. Its always the same thing with Tyler and Kayla. I'm even still trying to understand why he is so possessive of her all the damn time. Its annoying, and very unattractive. I don't want this story to end, but I feel like your just dragging it on and on. There is no drama, there is no plot, its just Tyler being possessive and Kayla being like a stupid woman who can stand up for herself. It was going to a good direction, Tyler seems like he was sorry and that he wants to change. But then in this chapter he goes to his old self again and acts like a obsessed psycho man. I just want Kayla to break things of with him for good and move on with her life. Their relationship is not healthy. If after what had happened Tyler still isn't showing any sign of changing, then he will never change. The story will just keep dragging on. I honestly don't know what to expect of this anymore. And I'm sure I'm not the only one who feels this way.
Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 11:52 am
I like this story. I'm just not understanding why he is this possessive.
Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 10:32 am
Tyler needs to stop. He can't keep Kayla in a bubble and go all crazy every time she talks to a guy. He needs to trust her enough to know that she's as committed to their relationship as he is. But, this theme keeps happening between the two of them. Why doesn't he trust her and why is he so jealous of everyone else around her. I understand being protective and possessive, but I think Tyler is a bit obsessive and crazy with it and needs to calm down.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 05:36 am
Nooooooooooo! Why'd you end it there? Please update sooooooooooooon
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 03:50 am
another cliff hanger
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 02:54 am
So good! Love this story! I really want them to end on a good note with no drama!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 01:10 am
great update...please don't let Tyler act stupid, allow him 2 listen 2 what Kalya has 2 say & not act like a jealous fool they just got back 2 gether! lol
take your time...i'm enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 21 2012 12:44 am
More! xD
Reviewer: QueenJay Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2012 11:11 pm
Tyler is stuck on stupid!! Does he not trust Kayla? His constant bouts of jealous say that he doesn't trust. Aaron is your voice of reason you need to listen to him before you blow it. Kayla loves you but she won't put up with how you are treating her. What is it going to take for Tyler to act like he's got some sense?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2012 09:46 pm
These two are to funny and cute
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: June 11 2012 03:40 am
They are a trip! But you have got to love them! Wonderful update! Thanks again! Please keep them coming. I can not wait to read the chapter when his momma finds out about Tyler jr,it's going to be some fireworks going off!!!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: June 11 2012 03:36 am
Love this couple and the angst they go througt. Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: June 11 2012 01:26 am
great update, when r those 2 going 2 get it together an relize that they belong 2 gether, because no on else will put up with them and their crap! lol
Thanks 4 the update!
Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 11 2012 12:39 am
Kayla you are making my teeth itch, Tyler say stupid things in anger but hell that man loves your ass!!! Give the man a break and being so stubborn. All of that stupidity is not good for the baby that your carrying. Your stupidity is causing you stress which in turn affects the baby. Wake up Kayla if you don't you may loose Tyler. Is that what you want Kayla? Kaleah you have me so investesd in these characters, I love this story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 09:58 pm
Thank you for the update ! I am so glad they're back together!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 09:51 pm
Loved it. I like this side of Tyler.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 08:41 pm
Wow! Sex in a broom closet....whew and it was hot as in smokin' an to think, jsut a few chapters back they were screaming at each other...and not in a good way! I am glad they are going to work things out! I will give you a 10 just for the, "Hot Sex in the closet" action!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2012 04:37 am
Please get rid of the Kevin fool, I really don't like him. Kevin is making my spidey sense tingle!! I am so glad that Kayla is finally coming to her damn senses but don't put a job above righting the problems of your relationship!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2012 08:10 am
Great update. Glad that she gave in a little.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2012 02:45 am