Excellent start!
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed reading it!!
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed
[Report This]Date: October 23 2011 06:25 pm
This was a great start. Alicia is definitely a strong person to make a decision like that and then raise her daughter on her own. I like her a lot...Sora comes from good stock.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment varbella, I like her alot too haha
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: October 23 2011 04:35 pm
perfect
Author's Response:
wow thnx u! :D hope u continue to enjoy the story as it progresses :)
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2011 06:55 am
Me likey!! More please.
Author's Response:
Haha, im working on it lol!! :P
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2011 06:10 am
Very good start
Author's Response:
thnx u :)
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2011 02:22 am
I can't wait to read more. You've already got my attention. Wonderful start.
Author's Response:
thnx u, im glad u like it and i hope u continue to read it :)
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 02:14 pm
I love this story so much. Honestly I never would have known that this was your first time uploading a story, all I say is that I hope that you continue to write stories as well as uploading them also. Thank you for this story as well.
Author's Response:
thnx u so much!! >.< keep a look out for the nxt chapter it's coming v.soon!
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 05:33 am
I like the beginning. Sora seems like she has had a hard life at only 6 years old, having to live without her father because his family might mistreat her because of her mother's race. Looking forward to reading more.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Thnx u for commenting :) I think that they both made a hard decision, but felt that it was the best for Sora. As the story develops, I hope people will begin to understand more about the relationship between Sora and her dad and the effect that this event had on her.
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 10:59 pm
Awwwe I already love it, please please UPDATE
I wanna know what happens next, I have a tingling feeling about this
UPDATE
UPDATE
UPDATE
Author's Response:
thnx tish1234, i will defo be updating soon so look out for it! ;)
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: tish1234 Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 08:51 pm
I love this begining very powerful
can't wait to read more keep it up
Author's Response:
Thnx u so much >< Im putting together the cast pics now and shud update soon so plz keep reading :)
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: underrestrains Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 08:44 pm
I love the beginning. I cant wait to read more. Sora is a pretty name.
Author's Response:
Thnx u, in japanese Sora means sky, i've always loved it as a name :)
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: anj1874 Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 08:29 pm
Wow, that was deep. Alicia was a strong woman. So Shiro's family had didn't agree with his choice of a mate, but why they decided to separate. Will you do flashbacks so that we can find out why? Was ALicia runover by a car on accident or was it murder? This is so good, please continue!!
Author's Response:
Thnx for reading, im glad you enjoyed it ^^ Alicia was definitely a strong women, to answer your question, they decided to live separately because they didn’t want their child to be brought up in a hostile environment with a family that didn't except her. ~Naturally, they just wanted to protect her. And i might do some flashbacks later, also as to whether or not it was an accident you'll just have to keep reading ;D
-PurpleChocolate
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 07:18 pm