Title: Chapter 5

Niall and Blaise in a same room?

Good read !

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2011 05:51 am

Title: Cast

What is Niamh Deges nationality?

Author's Response:

Her mother is black and mystery dad white.

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Date: November 09 2011 01:57 am

Title: Chapter 13

What happened back then to make her momma leave with two small children and no place to say?  Did Daniel threaten her life?  Which is what I believe happened.  Poor Niamh she is cared to love and be loved.  Watching her mother love and loose really affected her so she behaves like slut.  Whether the ho is a male or female it is still disgusting.  There is no way that I would leave my home, those busters would be gone!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2011 01:03 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh oh, both parents and her brother knew  each other and not Niamh and Blaise 0_0

Wonder how?

Love it so far.

I'm on to the next one.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2011 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Yeah, drama oversea !!!!

I'm on to the next 1.

 

P.S. What a terrible mother Blaise had.Why she went away?

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Date: November 08 2011 01:03 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Well, well Ms. Darla....

I can see Blaise and Niamh getting closer...

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Date: November 08 2011 12:15 pm

Title: Chapter 2

A moving room? Wow

Okay, love the characters and their interactions so far.

Niamh and Blaise, can I say whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?! 0_0

Whaaaaaaaaaaaat! Whaaaaaaaaaaaaat! Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!

I'm on to next chapter.

 

P.S. The last part(line) was funny,lol.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2011 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 12

Darla sees the connection between Blaise and Niamh, and so do I!!!  Darla is a hot mess.  I just hope that he can keep Niamh safe.  I don't trust Danny and I can't wait to read another update.



Author's Response:

I'm glad Darla won't be a psycho and let them do what needs to be done. 

  Soon Danny and Niamh will collide ...hard =)

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2011 02:39 am

Title: Cast

This is an "on the edge of your seat" story.  I'm loving it.  I guess Niall and Blaise are brothers, but who is his sister's father?  Hmmmm

Does Blaise know?  Does Niall?  I can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2011 02:08 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Must say, I like it so far.

I'm on to next 1.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2011 06:47 am

Title: Chapter 11

I am glad that Blaise reached out to Niamh.  They are both having the same problem but to different degrees but it seems to be a product of the same situation.    Daniel is evil incarnate and should die accordingly.  Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

These two are going to need each other like crazy. Daniel is a very nasty man....just wait and see

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2011 05:44 am

Title: Chapter 10

I can't wait to find out what happened between Lorraine and Joseph.  If Lorraine and Niall keep this up their relationship with Niamh will be destroyed.  Thank you for this update it was greatly appreciated!!



Author's Response:

Everything will be topsy turvy for the little family =)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2011 01:54 am

Title: Cast

I love this story! I cannot wait for the next update!! This story seems to get more and more intense...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoy it thnk you =)

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Date: November 07 2011 01:28 am

Title: Chapter 8

Joseph feels guilty about about not keeping in contact with Lorraine and her children. But why, guilt implies that he had a role in making them leave.  I love this story.  Who is going break first Lorraine, Niall or Niamh?  Niamh is too angry at her family to break first, but Lorraine is to busy holding onto lies so that leaves Niall.   I can't wait to read more!!

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Date: October 30 2011 06:15 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Justin is making my spidey sense tingle, and Niamh has the same feeling.  Joseph, I know that you are Niall father!!  I can feel it, so who is Niamh father.  Lorraine was a rolling stone!!  So is Justin attracting to Niamh or is he going to try to use her in whatever griff he has going on?  Such a wonderful story!!



Author's Response:

Justin ain't slick! Niamh's sees it!

 

Lorraine has  A LOT of explaining to do to her children. She just has to find the right moment to tell it to them herself, before the truth rears its ugly head. Justin is caught between the two, since he will not be completely clear on the dynamics of Niamh/Joseph's relationship(which will develp) he's going to start going by what he thinks without facts to back it up

 

 

Heck, I can't wait haha.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2011 02:22 am

Title: Chapter 6

Who is this Justin person, and why is trying to destroy Blaise and his father?  Why would he have to prove Niamh wrong?  I am not happy with her mother and brother either.  Who was his father talking to and what were they talking about?  So many questions and it's only chapter 6!!!  SO awesome!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 05:39 am

Title: Chapter 5

They were so wrong.  I am not surprised that Blaise was a little shit as a kid.  Why won't they tell Niamh the truth? It will set them free!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2011 04:35 am

Title: Cast

I think now I know why Niall was so angry!!  Lucy has some plaining to do!!!  Fabulous!!!!

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Date: October 25 2011 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 4

This is getting good!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 07:42 am

Title: Chapter 4

Lorraine may have known Joseph in the biblical sense, is Joseph Niall and Niamh father?  I sure hope not, as they already did the nasty.  Lorraine was just plain rude to Joseph and Niall lost his damn mind.  Niamh is a grown woman, and she just had some mind numbing nookie!!!  Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

You are on the right track, but one of those names in your comment will be switched with another. ;)

 

  Niamh just wants to feel nice! I think everyone deserves to when they need it =)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 05:39 am

Title: Cast

Loved it!! More please!!!

Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 3

 Blaise's mother left him as a little boy, why?  What kind of disfunction does this family have?  I am happy that Blaise has a close relationship with his father.  I am so glad that they will run into each so soon, I thought that you were going to torture us some!!! What happened to Niamah and Niall's father?  I can't to wait read about their meeting I know that it will explosive!!  Niall is going to have a conniption  when he sees those sparks between his little sister and Blaise.  I know that the connection will be palpable when they meet again.  I can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 05:48 pm

Title: Chapter 2

The sex was so hot, but does Blaise think that once would be enough.  You will regret not knowing her name when she leaves.  I can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

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Date: October 22 2011 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 1

Good start. I really like this chapter. More!

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Date: October 21 2011 03:39 pm



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