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Title: Chapter 6 "I Come This Day Before You"

Ok girl I seriously need more Gwen and Arthur! Great update! I can't wait for more I hope she doesnt get into trouble for her actions. 



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next chapter and having oodles of fun with the ARWEN moments :) 

 Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2012 07:20 am
Title: Chapter 6 "I Come This Day Before You"

I gotta say, that was beautiful. I love where you're taking this...their story of falling in love needs to be revitalized over and over again. I can't wait for the next installment.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I agree, their love story deserves many a telling and retelling :)

 Reviewer: A. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 28 2012 09:30 am
Title: Chapter 6 "I Come This Day Before You"

Another beautiful chapter!  Love the combination of myth and legend (except the part of Gwen and Lancelot betraying Arthur)!  I'm hoping this will be an ARWEN love story throughout and preferably NO LANCELOT!  If he has to be around then he'd better find someone else to love; women are aplenty for Lancelot to choose from and he should leave Gwen alone!  Also will hate the idea of Morgana bearing Arthur's child, Mordred.  Original legends said Mordred was Morgause's son by King Lot! 

ARWEN' s first meeting was so awkward yet at the same time sensually tintillating and both youngsters seem to find each other quite agreeable to stare at!  Will Arthur have the courage to court and win Guinevere's heart?  

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Yes I intend this to remain an ARWEN story, no Lancelotty shenanigans for our OTP :)

 Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 28 2012 04:20 am
Title: Chapter 6 "I Come This Day Before You"

Nicely done! I'm really enjoying the small, yet persistent unraveling of the characters, especially Gwen and Arthur.  They are too precious, each besotted with the other. 

I particularly enjoyed Gwen's quiet defiance with her token, and Arthur's acceptance. Take THAT, Uther Pendragon! 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really enjoyed writing the token scene. I wish I had the visual skills to render that scene: Gwen would look so amazing holding the token, with flowers in her hair etc :)
Your review is much appreciated!

 Reviewer: ribboninthesky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2012 10:47 pm


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