The way you've written the small quips of attraction between Arthur and Gwen has made the mood heat up so far. Throughout the chapter, we can feel Gwen's stance start to break down but I like the way you said she would 'challenge his pride'. Whatever is going to happen, I still like to think Gwen as not the simpering female of the love story but a strong one. Arthur on the other hand, I wonder if you'll make him overly prattish, more so he can grow as a character, like in the series but he seems like he's already to change for her. Morgana.... what's in store for her? darkness or light?
ps. I am glad this chapter is long!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your words! I too picture Gwen as a strong character, even if Arthur makes her weak in the knees ;) Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: A. Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 01 2012 08:12 pm
Seriously.... The interaction between Arthur and gwen, Its really warm my heart... I'm sure Gwen felt nervous the whole time Arthur staring at her lips. Oh.. When can they share their first kiss. Really hope it will be soon..
Author's Response:
I hope so too :p Will have to see where the muse takes me. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: T. Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 01 2012 12:54 pm
Ohhhh, he wants to be a better man for her. :)
Author's Response:
He does :)
Reviewer: AGDoren Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2012 07:39 am