Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

hi, we're waiting... Please update soon. Thanks.xxx

Reviewer: arthurgwen2010 Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

It was a wonderful chapter...& Arwen kiss for the first time.. By the way, Who is the father of morgana Baby? 

Reviewer: Tazmin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 10:07 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

Just as amazing as the last 9 chapters cant wait for more! 

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 09:20 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

These last two chapters were really good. Arthur and Guinevere undone by one little kiss. *sigh* I can't wait to read the enxt one. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much :) Glad you liked the kiss ;)

Reviewer: AGDoren Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 11:06 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

Morgause forging the confrontation between Morgana and Guinevere?  Will Morgana become thirsty for power and seek Camelot for her son, Mordred, in which she thinks lawfully belongs to him and will see Guinevere as a threat and rival for the throne of Camelot?  Is the May Queen Guinevere?  Legends say Guinevere was out maying before she was abducted by Melwas.  Will Melwas attempt to kidnap Guinevere and try to make her his wife by rape?  Don't want that to happen because it will ruin ARWEN forever and I want Arthur to be Guinevere's first man, period!  How strong is Guinevere?  Did she inherited magical abilites from her ancestress?  



Author's Response:

Gwen has no magical ability, only knowledge of and connection to the pagan tradition that magic is a part of. I don't write rape scenarios because I'm not comfortable with handling that subject, so I can safely assure you none of that will occur :)
The rest...you'll have to wait and see...:)

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 10:44 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

Wow!  If only all your chapters could be this long!  That was some ARWEN hotness!  Can hardly wait till they get more acquainted and not just in a physical sense!  Would love for them to develop an unbreakable spiritual bond something transcending the intimacy of their love!  

Who is this mysterious woman who enters Morgana's dreams and is trying to lure her into darkness?  What is her motive?  Have a strong feeling it's Morgause and that she is beginning to plant the seeds of discord and distrust and hatred in Morgana against Gwen!  Who is the May Queen?  Why would she be a threat to Morgana's child?  Is the child Mordred who is fated to bring about the demise of King Arthur and Camelot?  If so, then I'm hoping Lancelot doesn't show up at all because he was never in the original legends since you introduced Melwas, who was reputed to be quite a lecherous bastard who always lusted after Gwen and had her abducted and the original rescuer of her was none other than Arthur himself.  NO LANCELOT PLEASEEEEEEE!!!  If he is to be around, he'd better have nothing to do with a  love triangle as there could be so many more different story lines for him.  Why couldn't he have a love of his own and it better NOT BE GUINEVERE!  In the legends Elena loved Lancelot but her love wasn't returned.  She killed herself! SAD!!  Wouldn't minded if Elena had a happier ending for once and may Lancelot return her love and claim her as his one true love so ARWEN can finally be happy?  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your lovely review! Don't worry this is an ARWEN story, no one shall mess with the glory that is ARWEN :D

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 05:58 am



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