Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

So good! I look forward to more! And yes! A magic reveal to Gwen! I am glad she is so quick on the up take.



Author's Response:

Haha yea I always wished the show would've let Gwen in on Merlin's secret: it just seemed natural, what with them being friends and so close to Arthur. But I guess that would require the show writers to give more development and screen time to a woman **eyeroll**

Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: Candace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 29 2012 05:08 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

Arthur has guts!  He stood up for Gwen when Uther insulted her!  Thank goodness he believes in Gwen's virtue!  Will he always have faith in her and them though?  Guess only time will tell!  Hope Arthur will never disappoint or hurt Gwen?  

What is it that Morgause has against Uther to warrant her to corrupt Morgana and steal her away?  Arthur is right!  There is more to this enigma than Uther is telling!

Is Gwen clairvoyant?  Can she sense magic around her?  Merlin must have told her his secret.  If only Arthur would trust Merlin like she does!

I fear for Gwen's safety not just because she's a witch, but because of what Melwas might do to her!  Wonder if Gwen could frighten him to believe she was a dangerous and powerful sorceress so he'll keep his distance away from her?

How soon will ARWEN reunite again?  In a few years' time?  Or will some unforeseen events compel Gwen to leave her kingdom and travel to Camelot?  

That was the saddest ARWEN goodbye moment!  Arthur longed to stay, but since they're destined to be together then Fate will work its miracles!  

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah Arthur's coming into his own and realizing who he is, and what he wants for himself :) I'm glad you noticed that.

Thank you as always for reviewing. Your words and details are deeply, deeply appreciated!

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 28 2012 06:49 am

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

Well the last chapter left us on a bit of a cliffhanger and this one is just leaving me wanting more. As always you're writing is lovely and evocative. And I am already eager for Arthur and Guinevere's reunion.



Author's Response:

I always look forward to your comments :) Thank you for your regular reviews, they are deeply appreciated!

Reviewer: AGDoren Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 09:15 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

Love me some Merlin. This is an excellent story. Thanks so much for sharing your talents! I'll be waiting on the next update!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review! It means a lot <3

Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 02:17 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

What a sorrowful ending. Everyone hurt, everyone frightened, everyone concerned. 

I am lookng forward to part 2. 

Thanks for allowing Merlin to share his secret with Guinevere. I wonder how Morgana came to know? Will we perchance have a "flashback"?



Author's Response:

Was it Morgana who called him Emrys? Or was it the demon-child? ;) Hehehe all shall be revealed...in time. Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: sallysparrow3 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 08:51 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

AMAZING!! i am a huge fan of A&G and i have loved reading this 

Am now a huge, following fan of your work.. cant wait for more!!! 



Author's Response:

Awww thanks hun! Your words are deeply appreciated <3

 

Reviewer: Teges Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 12:57 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

Fantastic chapter! 

I really hate Uther right now! 

What a sweet moment between Arthur and Gwen! Perfect! *.* aww.. a ring!! :O and it was his mother's! 

I wonder when they'll see each other again? hope veeeeeeeeerrrry sooon! :) 

 

Can't wait for the next installment! I really like your story! :) 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you likd the ARWEN moment! :) Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: guen_evere Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 09:39 am

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

yay... So sad.:( ... I'm really really worry to gwen safety and please dont let melwas force gwen to marry him. Thanks so much for you're wonderful part one. Hoping part two very soon. He he he. I wish you are very well now and no more sickness to come. Lol. xxx

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm feeling much better! Me and the hubby are both relaxing at home, recovering :) Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: arthurgwen2010 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 04:31 am



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