I like this story! Gwen was definitely the highlight of the show for me, and I enjoyed the Arthur and Gwen pairing. Nevertheless, Gwen didn't get much screentime or development, so it's nice to read this interpretation. Gwen's inner strength and quiet resilience is a large part of what makes her my favorite character, and you're doing a good job with displaying that in the story.
I also enjoy the details you share - the bread, the leather thong, the milk, the emotions of the characters. Really makes me feel as though I'm there, and I love being drawn into the story like that.
I hope you can update soon! Keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for this review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story and that you've taken the time to comment. I plan to update on Sunday (fingers crossed) and I hope that you continue to enjoy it.
Reviewer: ribboninthesky Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2012 12:56 am