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Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

What can one say, you hit the nail on the head.  What a metaphor for somethins so lovely and moving as Chapter 8.

 Reviewer: Diane Garcia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2012 03:52 am
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

Gwen can't give up on Morgana!  Hope is alive!  Will Gwen discuss her suspicions with Arthur?  Secrets are non-existent between true lovers!

 

 Reviewer: carebear123 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 05:11 am
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

I believe in Arthur's profound love for Guinevere, but until she has that wedding ring in her finger, a man's words are worthless and weightless.  

There has to be more than just passion ARWEN shares.  Marriage is more than that.  Is ARWEN aware of that credo?

 Reviewer: darkbeauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 05:07 am
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

Cold baths anyone?  This was the most sizzling, spiciest, naughtiest, but most enchantingly beautiful love scene I've ever read!  Is there more on the way?  Looking forward to ARWEN's marriage, wedding night, and every moment in which they can't keep their hands to themselves!

Next:  Arthur AMPUTATING Melwas and hanging his entrails as a warning to anyone who dares to defile his beloved Guinevere.

 



Author's Response:

LOL I love how much the Arwenites hate Melwas , and all the creative methods by which they want him dead :p

Thank you so much for your lovely review :)

 Reviewer: ARWENLOVER Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 10:57 pm
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

WOW!!!!!  ARWEN smexy scenes are too hot to handle!  Arthur better keep his promise to marry Guinevere!  A woman isn't capable of giving everything to a man if she wasn't sure of her heart.  Arthur ought to consider that!

Did any peaceful talks occurred between Arthur and Mithian?  Will their kingdoms be friends and support each other when the occasion rises?  

Will Melwas weakened after and if Arthur tortures him without an ounce of clemency and reveal his allies' identities and motives?  

How could Morgana replace her love for Gwen, Arthur, Merlin, and Camelot to achieve Morgause's aims?  Is there still hope for Morgana's redemption?  

 

 Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 10:36 pm
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

Thank you for this much needed A/G moment. I agree they have been through a lot and I think they needed to know how much they loved each other and cant do without each other for them to conquer whatever is coming, which I can tell will be nasty. Their love will surely carry them through it. Their love making was so beautifully written, it was amazing! loved this chapter and happy they are back together.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!

 Reviewer: angelmygirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2012 06:12 pm
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

Let's just say I'm feeling hot and bothered, lol. Great chapter! About time Melwas rots in a cell, before he rots in hell. I still do not know what the M sisters are planning after 9 chapters, I can hardly wait for the reveal! More please!



Author's Response:

Ha the 'M sisters'...I like that name for them :) Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad the sexiness was hot and bothersome :D

 Reviewer: Elle Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

Well it gives you the feeling that A/G are settled so-to-speak. Uther is ill and Gwen comes with a nice sized dowery. I think Arthur can pull off the marriage he wants. Morgana is very well done here, a villain but a human one. :) And now Morguase and Morgan's plot can be the focus of the story.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like Morgana's characterization. I will never forgive the BBC for the botched job of her story. Thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: AGDoren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 05:33 pm
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

Loved this chapter; hussy that I am I've been anxiously awaiting Gwen and Arthur's coming together...well worth the wait.  After Melwas almost violated Gwen, I was really hoping that Arthur would be her first...love these two together.  So he's going to ask for her hand...wonder what Uther will have to say about that...

It'll be interesting to see what Morgana and her evil brood have planned; hopefully the evil can be circumvented before it takes over.

Great job; looking forward to reading more...no pressure of course:)



Author's Response:

Hussy as I am, I was waiting to write this! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it, after so much build up I didn't want to be anti-climactic (pun intended) ;)

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 03:27 pm
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

No other words can describe this chapter... It's brilliant!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you!!

 Reviewer: Tazmin Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 09:58 am
Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

This was very well told! Loved how sweet the love scene was to read!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It was hard to find the right balance between sweet and sexy for the lovemaking, so I'm glad people enjoyed it :)

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 07:48 am


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