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Title: 5. Confliction Pt. 1

Please update, I have a feeling things are about to get interesting.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 04:24 pm

Title: 5. Confliction Pt. 1

 

Aw man c'mon, don't stop now,more please more...Update!!!

Update!!!! Update!!!! PLEASE... :-)

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 06:14 am

Title: 5. Confliction Pt. 1

Oh, oh...I hope that there will not be any more shed that Ant does for Adina.  I wonder if Hatch knew about the meeting and that is why he brought them to this particular restaurant.  Is Hatch part of the mafia family as well?  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2012 01:04 pm

Title: 4. Famiglia

I hope that Ant survives this ordeal.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2012 12:58 pm

Title: 3. Destiny and Fate

Not sure why Ant still wants this crazy woman.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2012 12:53 pm

Title: 2. Some Things Never Change

Now there is another killer in the mix....I hope that Ant doesn't feel that he has to kill Hatch too.  Although, Hatch saved Adina from her jacked up stepfather.  I hope that he isn't still pining away for Adina.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2012 12:48 pm

Title: 1. Priorities

Good update.  How do these folks always find each other.  Now Ant is in danger of becoming a casualty because of his lust for Adina.  What would happen to his son if he is killed?  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2012 12:41 pm

Title: 5. Confliction Pt. 1

You are such a tease leaving me hanging. Loved this update . Can't wait for the next .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2012 06:14 am

Title: 5. Confliction Pt. 1

And now the fun begins. Adina and Ant are in the same air space. And I am looking forward to that confrontation more then anything else.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2012 12:47 am

Title: 4. Famiglia

I still cant figure Ant out but that is what makes him so damn interesting to begin with. I am looking forward to the next chapter, and hopefully by then Adina and Ant will have crossed paths and Adina could see/learn more about Ant other then what she has seen and what she thinks she knows about him.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2012 01:12 am

Title: 4. Famiglia

Oh no .. There will be Blood . This was such a good update . I wanna know what happens next !!

 

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2012 12:44 am

Title: 3. Destiny and Fate

Another great chapter, I am waiting patiently for Ant and Adina to come face to face again, that will be one interesting conversation to have. Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Adina can be happy but I have a feeling her happiness is a quest that she is avoiding because she sees and knows the truth.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2012 01:00 am

Title: 1. Priorities

lovee it

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 08:23 am

Title: Intro: That's My Girl

great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 08:22 am

Title: Cast

love the pics

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 08:22 am

Title: 2. Some Things Never Change

good job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 08:21 am

Title: 2. Some Things Never Change

Nice update . It's so good that Adina has friends like Hatch and Evan to look out for her. Can't wait for the next update .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 05:19 am

Title: 2. Some Things Never Change

Poor, poor, Adina...I can't understand why grown men find children desirable...what a sicko...

So glad she has a friend like Evan to love & care for her! 

Wow; so Hatch commited murder for her...that's deep...

Great job so far; look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 03:26 am

Title: Cast

lovedddd itt!! more more more!! im liking hatch! ooohhhhh whats gonna happen! more pleasee this is too good lol

Reviewer: bubblegum7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 01:19 am

Title: 2. Some Things Never Change

Love Hatch already, but I hope he doesn't stand in Ant's way

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 10:59 pm

Title: 2. Some Things Never Change

Another great chapter, I am trying to get use to all the characters. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Glad Adina got out of the houst looking forward to learning more about Hatch. Even though I am an Ant girl Hatch seems to love Adina even though I am not sure she will ever see him the same way. Love the friendship between Adina and Evan.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 10:53 pm

Title: 1. Priorities

These two are a trip...Ant better not get himself axed over Adina, especially since she's not totally sold on him...

Would like to see these two finally figure it out and be together, but who know what the future hold for these two...

Looking forward to reading more...

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2012 04:56 pm

Title: 1. Priorities

Ant when are you straighten out and fly right?  Adina wants a legit man, not mobster who will either be dead or in jail.  Love it!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2012 02:09 am

Title: 1. Priorities

Ant seems to be in a shit full of trouble with all, hopefully he can work all this out and Adina will want to see him. Yes he killed a man in front of her but I don't believe it was a pissing contest but him wanting to protect her. Southern Scribe I would just love to sit in your head and watch the thoughts fly by. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2012 12:37 am

Title: 1. Priorities

The background information is great! Loved the update!!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 06 2012 09:53 pm



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