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Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Great story .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 06:38 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

I like.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 06:27 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Loved this....awesome start :)

 Reviewer: Jamilla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 05:42 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

I'm going to enjoy this, hopefully we won't get too much of the a**hole brother. Although, I know hw will be around.  Mom dotes on him because he looks like the man that walked out on her, and doesn't give a second thought to the one that has been her rock all these years.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Mom dotes on Jared because he reminds her of her own father who doted on her when she was growing up.  It is Charlie who reminds her of her husband and she takes her frustrations out on him because of it.

More is coming soon!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 05:05 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Me Like, Me Like....Get him Inga!!!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 04:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

sorry, meant to give higher rating but my comp has a mind of it's own.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 04:37 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Love it already and can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 04:35 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

oh forgot to leave this it is really heartbreaking how charlies mother expected him to take an adult role after the father walked out that was very irresponisible of her and then how do she repay him by babying and giving all her attention to the problem child and completly ignoring the twins and charlie i mean when will her ass get a clue when charlie finally makes the move and leave her trifling butt ohh just upset me how a parent favors one child over the other ones anywhoo enough of the ranting i absolutly love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Hershey:  Charlie didn't mind helping his mother because he didn't want his family to end up in foster care after his father deserted them.  Mom was working a lot and needed Charlie's help with his siblings.  However, there is no excuse for her favoring and babying Jared.  I don't like parents who do that , but I had to throw some drama in there. LOL  More is coming soon.

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 03:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Oh yeah whoo i am loving this whoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 03:35 pm


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