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Title: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

Brenda you are the shiznit!!  Charles Peterson you an asshole of the highest order, you tried to sell you children to get you own neck out of a noose.  Now you want to deny the woman that you abandoned the chance to be free.  I want him to be run over by a mack truck.  I am so glad that Fred called the sherriff on his crazy, selfish ass.  Charlie please don't push Inga away with your need to keep her near you.  Charlie boy do you love hard!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2012 03:46 am
Title: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

Great update!!!

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2012 02:47 am
Title: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

Well, I say that they REALLY need to talk some more. They probably needed to have had this conversation a long time ago, though. Inga needs to decide if she can handle who Charlie really is; although it appears she's just now sees exactly what that is. There's no crime in backing out if there are reservations on either party's side. 

Charlie....I cant believe I'm saying this because its Inga I'm usually giving a harder time to, but he's in dangerous waters here. Not being able to truly compromise will make his marriage a hard one. Instead, he's of the mindset to wear her down. Not a good strategy. It shows a kind of rigidity;especially concerning things she deems personally important. So he really doesn't see her point of view, but he thinks she doesn't need to know that. And I'm guessing this has more to do with his father than even he knows.

Charles Sr. is a pig and I hope he really gets it this time.

Good stuff! 

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2012 01:46 am
Title: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

Loved the update!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2012 12:46 am
Title: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

WOW Charles Sr. Is still in the picture? What would it take for that man to realize enough is enough? I can't wait until Charlie and Jared get their hands on him,he's such a pain in the a$$. And I love how much Charlie is in love with Inga, but I think he's being a little unfair asking her to quit her job. He need tolet up a little before he push her away. Great update as always, can't wait for the next one.

 Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 11:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Inga, gives as good as she gets.. I need to find me a Charlie of my own..   Ladies, ya'll just had to talk up Charles Sr.. You think that fool would have learned his lesson but it seems he doesn't believe shit stinks and sugars sweet.. A hard head makes for a soft ass.. You would think Charles Sr. would know about this but I guess he hasn't learned yet..

Great update!!

 Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 11:43 pm
Title: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

Okay, so Inga does reciprocate in oral department:D I hope they can just remember that they love each other. As for Charles senior how did he survive or escape being a booty warrior for hire?! Just like the cockroach he is still alive and kicking. Whatever plans you have for him can't be vile enough for him. Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 10:58 pm
Title: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

Charlie can be very intense at times... but I think thats because of his limited exposure to life and love. Inga sounds like she loves Charlie but has some reserve as well.. it will be interesting once they get married.

Great update..

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 10:55 pm
Title: Chapter 16 Feeding the Obsession

Great update and I love this story. Please update soon! 

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 10:29 pm
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

It seems that everyone is getting what they have always wanted. And that is true happiness. Nice update.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 06:52 pm
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Dayum Inga what a problem she has. A man that wants her all the time and has the hardware to do it. I think Charlie is sweet to desire her even during that time of the month. I guess Charlie is the only one who likes doing oral because Inga could have done that to Charlie and he busts a nutt, and goes to sleep then there would be no messy sheets for her to scold him for. I can't wait to read what happens once they are married. Thanks for another great chapter.  

 Reviewer: Charly43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 06:20 pm
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Inga is not putting her foot down on the issue...makes me wonder if she is serious.

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Date: September 09 2012 04:43 pm
Title: Cast Pictures

Wow. John made my heart stop,he is hella fine

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2012 12:31 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Loved the update.

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Date: September 05 2012 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Despite a reluctant muse, this was a great chapter!! Thanks for the update....

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 11:23 pm
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 05:35 pm
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

That was cute! I got scared for a moment I thought Inga was going to back out of the wedding.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 08:38 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Inga really has created a monster in Charlie! Loved this chapter!!

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Date: September 04 2012 08:09 am
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Me likes!!

 

 Reviewer: LatashaNicole Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 06:30 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

I think Jared is overstepping right here. I get his point because it being his boss, it can get messy, but thats the way it is. He's living his own life anyway so deal with it. 

And Charlie...ok...he's had enough sex now that the new car smell should have worn off! I'm not with Inga a lot, but I see her agitation with Charlie on that. She should be able to go about her business in life without Charlie jumping her, or wanting to jump her everytime she's in sight. We feel gross during our time and the last thing we want is that kind of action then...yuck!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 05:31 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Thanks for another wonderful addition to this magnificant story whoo just love it!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 04 2012 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

This update made me smile. Jared reminds me of my little brother. At times he's sweet but fiercely protected. So I can somewhat understqand where he's coming from. For so long he's been the center of his mother's attention. Then there was the pig, Charles Sr. So to see his mother in a new light has got to be difficult. I like the boundries they have established in their relationshuip. The household seems more laid back.

As for Charlie needs to worker on his jealousy issue. His stong arm tatics may push Inga away. She is already starting to questions his possessiveness.

And Brenda, that's for the update. Even though you are fighting wih you muse; the wait was well worth it. I love me some Charlie and Jared.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 05:10 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

That damn Charlie...he kills me,lol!! Brenda, when I was living on the Westbank in New Orleans, I went to  Texas Roadhouse every Friday with my roommate and friends. I miss that place so damn muchhhh!!! (Sobbing loudly with a runny nose). 

Thanks for bringing back the memories.

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 04:40 am
Title: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

boy, oh boy..I love the character and their different personality.

 

Great Job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Jared is a trip....he's acting like a little kid when it comes 2 his mother dating,  she needs 2 get her groove back! LOL

 

Charlie has no patience when it comes 2 his Inga.....great update!

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Date: September 04 2012 04:20 am


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