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Title: Chapter 23

Too bad Trevor couldn't forgive Richard, although I do see why he is still angry with him. Great update overall!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 24 2013 04:11 am
Title: Chapter 23

This was very good.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2013 02:27 am
Title: Chapter 23

Thank you for the update.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 07:26 pm
Title: Chapter 23

Okay, I know the town is small but how did Richard find out that FAST?  Who saw them and ran their mouths?  Surely. Trevor didn't call Richard up himself.  Sucks what happened to Trevor in high school...wish Richard had the balls to stand up to his racist friends and help his old childhood friend.  I suppose this story is wrapping up soon but I would love to know more about their life in Nashville.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 04:10 pm
Title: Chapter 23

I understand why the guy upset with richard but i hope he forgive him and move on in his life. I'm hope shonti richard stay together. thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 02:09 pm
Title: Chapter 23

Trevor has every right to be angry but damn that shit happened in high school.  I really hope that Shonti gets Richard too leave. Richard it is time to move forward and start living your life with music all the way in it. Great update!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 01:47 pm
Title: Chapter 23

Nice...

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 01:01 pm
Title: Chapter 22

So awesome! Shonti is moving to Nashville with her man! I love this story!

 

 

 

 

 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 02:40 pm
Title: Chapter 22

Luv this story, but you need an editor and to read chapters before you post.

Shonti grabbed a "bowel of grapes". That's just plain wrong.



Author's Response:

if that's an invitation to be a beta...yeah.  I'm too lazy and I write these things drunk sometimes...LOL  Not really, well...a bit...

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 05:30 am
Title: Chapter 22

I'm so glad to see an update for this story. Shonti's going to move and try to make this work with Richard. It's about time :)

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 08:32 pm
Title: Chapter 22

Great update!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 07:57 pm
Title: Chapter 22

So awesome! Shonti is moving to Nashville with her man! I love this story!

 

 

 

 

 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 07:39 pm
Title: Chapter 22

Nice chapter. So glad Shonti and Richard are getting along so well.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 04:17 pm
Title: Chapter 21

Yeah, I am so glad that she is moving to Nashville with Richard!!  Shonti you have made the right decision.

This story is fucking-fantastic!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 03:26 am
Title: Chapter 21

So happy we got an update so quickly. I'm really happy that Shonti is going to move with Richard to Nashville.

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2012 07:38 pm
Title: Chapter 21

Well Richard talks to his friend and that she stay with him. They love each other and think they be happy together. thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2012 04:48 pm
Title: Chapter 21

Shonti, you know you love that man and want to be with him so go ahead and start planning the move. Great update!

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Date: November 23 2012 12:44 pm
Title: Chapter 20

Nice update,really starting to like Richard and Shonti as a couple...

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 01:48 pm
Title: Chapter 20

Yay! Wise friend, there! Glad they are gonna go for it.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 20

Great update! Glad to see Lila is encouraging their relationship! Can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 11:07 pm
Title: Chapter 20

Yeah, do it move...Maybe a little bundle of joy, will help move the process along quicker....wink, wink....

 Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 03:36 am
Title: Chapter 20

Shonti is talking about moving to Nashville with that fine Richard my have times changed.  Please don't wait us too long for another update.  Shonti's talking about this move like Richard has made up his mind to move.  Slow your role Shonti, but I am glad that you are willing to make a committment to be with Richard.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 02:50 am
Title: Chapter 20

Another terrific chapter. I really think Shonti and Richard should try hard to be together. Her friend Lilia gave very good advice.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 07:39 pm
Title: Chapter 20

I agree with her friend. I think her grandfather knew these two fit and could make it work. Hopeful she stays with him. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 04:26 pm
Title: Chapter 19

I hope Shonti decides to move with Richard!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 07:16 am


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