Why does Emery tell Jimmy her name was Alisha? ...I'm really dumb founded by this.
I truly love this story though can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
She is going for a sense of anonymity, she believes it'd be dangerous to tell a stranger her name. Thank you for reading! :)
Reviewer: grlgrl7 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 24 2012 09:47 am
I love your story. So much so that I'm about to read your other one. I really like your writing style and creative ideas.
As to who she should be with? I don't know. But, I'll have a hell of a time reading whomever gets a chance to spend and ounce of time with Emery, she's lovely inside and out.
BTW, I also think Logan likes her, it's pretty obvious if you ask me. The ice cream was a dead giveaway and the 'heart' gift backed it up. I would not be surprised if he had it bad for her all these years. I love unrequited love from the hero's persective **hint hint**
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: June 15 2012 02:49 am
This is the first "Teen or Above" story that I've ever been interested in reading. So far so good. I guess I don't always have to have hot butt naked sex to stay interested in a story.... Who Knew....LOL!!!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: June 12 2012 05:40 am
hahaha, i knew i was going to love this story and this update pretty much confirmed it! loved the interaction between Logan and Emery, i'm glad she dared to step out and flirted with him!
hell yeah, I LOOK FORWARD TO MUCH MORE!!!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: June 11 2012 10:51 am
It's so funny cos I think Logan is a turd. I wish Emery had a little more attitude cos girl she swaggin' down low low
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 11 2012 10:09 am
Emery is playing with fire, but I'm really interested in this story. The more the merrier.
Emery has a crush on Logan and it goes back to way before he got fine. The flashback about the paper heart might provide a clue as to how Logan feels about her. I think the only reason he doesn't pursue her is because of his relationship with Darrell. She might not be in love with him, but he is her first crush and she sees him every day and that has not died down. Maybe, she does need a distraction as he seems to be the only guy she's ever thought about.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: June 10 2012 08:14 pm
I don't understand Emery, if she isn't in love with Logan then why risk his relationship with her brother? Emery think about Logan as Darrell already said something about Logan not winking at his sister. I am glad that Justin hasn't shown up yet because doesn't seem to above using people to get what she wants. I can see Emery learning more about herself during this transformation and her attempt at seducing Logan. The question is, will she like what she sees? Great chapter!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 06:49 pm
She will start liking the new guy to both her twin and Logan's dismay. She just need an distraction other than Logan right now. I'm not sure who I want her to be with yet need more info on this mysterious guy.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 06:13 pm
Love it! Keep it coming! I want to read it from Logan's point if view. I know he likes her. Jelaously is a good thing!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 05:32 pm
Logan all the way, Jason as a good new friend. He can help her get her man.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 03:59 pm
I'm liking Jimmy, their text convo is effortless. With Logan comes a whole lot of arrogance.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 02:37 pm
Thanks for a great update. I can't wait to see who the mystery person is. AS for Logan I guess he finally saw Emery as a girl.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 01:45 pm