Damn!! I need an update asap lol. I just read this today and couldn't stop and you ended it like this?!? Omg can't wait for part 2. Wtf is Logan goin to do and how the f is she gonna get away from going to London.!!?
Great story, love the characters and the drama. Great job!
Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2012 03:12 am
Ummmm wow she should just move in with Logan
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 31 2012 09:06 pm
wow I didn't thiunk things would happen how they did so fast
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed
[Report This]Date: October 07 2012 12:51 am
I read your other story on Fictionpress. I liked it. Really did, but the mother hated her daughter in that one too. It makes me sad. I really hope Emmy turns her back on both parents. She doesn't need them. She has her brother. Please make her happier in part two. Please. I will still read it even if she isn't but PLEASE!
Reviewer: Tara Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 29 2012 09:01 pm
I'm starting to think that Emery needs to leave. England might not be so bad. By the time she returns, she'll be an adult. And her time there might give her some confidence and some perspective so she can cut that damn she-devil out of her life. That harpy doesn't DESERVE respect. She pimped out her own daughter, for criminy sake! She should be in jail. What if the coach wanted more than to cope a feel? Would she have prostituted Emery? She didn't care how far it went, he could've easily raped her. So, no, Emery has so mother.
Damn, if this wasn't a good chapter. It's hard to get a handle on Logan's feelings for Emery. It's clear he has them, but is he having a hard time with them. Wonder what his reaction will be when he finds out that Emery is going away, and not just for the summer. This is about to get really complicated. Post soon, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 29 2012 03:13 pm
please please please get part 2 out ASAP. My god what a great way to end!!
Reviewer: jen Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 11:57 pm
What?! Ugh! Nooooooooooo
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 06:55 am
Wow. Thank you for updating it so quickly. I can't wait to read some more. Keep that ink flowin'!!!
Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 05:41 am
Seriously though! So happy to see this updated so quickly then I read it and I had to read it again. So seriously? What the **** is everyone's problem? Logan? Jimmy? The woman who birthed Emery? That was not what I was expecting. Anxiously awaiting part 2 cuz I just can't. Good job
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 05:15 am
This was WONDERFUL!! I can't wait until part 2 is up!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 03:50 am
Her mother Eden is really an awful parent. You ignored your children for years and really expect them to be respectful hell they raised themselves. Eden you just ensured that your relationship with Emery will never be close one. You send her away now and she will never come back. I can't say that I blame for blowing up at her mother but her not giving Logan a chance to talk to her that was stupid.
Now bring on part II of Make It Nasty.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 03:10 am
She's a horrible mom. I hope she shares with her brother and he cuts his ties with mommie dearest.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 02:50 am
say whhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttt!! I am drunk and you are brilliantt!!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 02:44 am
I teared up during this chapter. Why would Logan not kiss her? Even if he didn't want everybody seeing, he could have taken her in the tent. He really confuses me. There are no words for her f#cktard of a mom. I knew that she was shady with that pageant business but to allow a grown man to feel up your child is beyond disgusting. And of course she's not sending Emery away because of her behavior but simply out of guilt. Out of sight, out of mind. I hope that Darrell cuts her from his life. I don't know whats going to happen in the next part but I hope that she and Logan end up together. Please update soon!
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 02:34 am
yay!! now we can get a jimmy and emery story going!!
Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 28 2012 02:23 am