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Title: Chapter 8

So now he making breakfast for her dam can I have a jason lol. Her friends always wanted to be in her business smh. I wonder if she going to work at the hotel? Thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 8

Yeah, Lauren is beginning to sound like Alicia....she may have to get rid of her before too much longer...to bad though! Jason is too much he bought the girl a car...not just any car...a mercedes, now how in the hell is she going to explain it to nosey ass Alicia without sounding crazy?  He should have bought her a used toyota corrolla or camry that would have made better sense....but rich people do not think in practical ways like us poor people!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2012 04:05 pm
Title: Chapter 8

I'm in love with this story! I wish she told her we need someone else to talk to about jason when shes upset.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 08:47 am
Title: Chapter 8

I'll check out your other projects but I really love this couple.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 04:15 am
Title: Chapter 8

She does not work, so how can she explain getting that expensive ride?

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 06:49 am
Title: Chapter 8

Why are they hiding their relationship? Thanks



Author's Response:

they're hiding their relationship because Keyshia does not want anything to do with being famous

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2012 12:48 pm
Title: Chapter 8

I am loving this story.  I hope that Lauren doesn't turn out to be anything like Alicia.  Something tells me that Alicia is not that loyal, it seems as though she is money hungry and is willing to do anything to get it.  Lauren seems to be a follower willing to do anything dispite her judgement if it pleases the leader.  I hope that the other two friends find a love like Keyshia.  

 

A new fan,

Kim

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 03:35 am
Title: Chapter 8

I like the fact that he missed her so much that he went thru the trouble of tracking her down. And he's not pressed about sex so much as starting a great relationship. Thumbs up Jason! (And the thoughtfullness of giving her a luxury car doesn't hurt either.) I love this story.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 06:27 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Please update soon. Really ejoying the story. I will check out your other story.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 05:53 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Great story finding myself,  I don't trust her friends.   I can't wait to see if Jason is strong enough to be with Keyshia.

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 04:07 pm
Title: Chapter 8

I know its hard to keep a big secret and im ready to she her revealit and make her friends eat their words and look stupid....hahaha

 Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 07:04 am
Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter!

 Reviewer: Leoslove Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 12:22 am
Title: Chapter 8

Most excellent!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 11:56 pm
Title: Chapter 8

I want so waffles ugghhhh I wish I get  jason someday

 Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 09:20 pm
Title: Chapter 8

great update, pelase update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 05:14 am
Title: Chapter 8

A man who can cook and is fine too. She should keep him. Plus he gave her a very expensive car!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 04:28 am


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