Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 15

Eric please you are little boy Kee need a real man like Jason.  I hope she break up with eric. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 15

I read the authors response and it makes sense. She does not want the drama with someone famous but i so want them to confess love and work through it and be together! 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2012 01:53 am

Title: Chapter 15

ugh my heart is hurting. why is she acting so damn difficult! I love it! please let them find his mom (although it would be really dramatic if his mother was actually dead)

Reviewer: babs Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2012 06:09 am

Title: Chapter 15

This is still a great story. Dont be discouraged by some of the negatice reviews. I do agree with some of the sentiments. Its time for Kiesha to either grows some lady balls and be honest with herself and Jason. If his status in life is more intimidating than her love for him then she needs to cut all ties and move on with someone "safe" enough for her.In the meantime Jason needs to let his testicles drop and man up. Which is more important? Kiesha or his inheiritance and status. Either way both of them need to stop pussyfooting around. Something needs to happen and someone need to decide if love is worth it because this going around each other is getting annoying and played out. 

Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 01:34 am

Title: Chapter 15

Oh oh, she has some explaining to do!! Don't trust Eric either!! Where was he when she was trying to call him? Great update!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 08:17 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Jason should come in and kick Eric's arse. And Keisha should just be with Jason.

Reviewer: Apple Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Uh oh!!!!!!! Update soon I can't wait to see what happens :)

Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 06:13 pm

Title: Chapter 15

So NOW Eric is worried about her after he left in the freezing rain....UGH.  Aw @ Jason and Keisha...I see what you did there.  I hope Keisha drops the loser soon...she is afraid of her feelings for Jason but she is not happy when she's not with him.  And yeah Jason needs to go ahead and break up with his girlfriend but something tells me that she is going to drop him....she didn't seem too happy to show up naked at his condo only for him to turn her down because he was a having a "meeting" with his assistant.  She figured it out....I'm sure.  I am kind of on the fence about Jason leaving everything and starting over with Keisha.  True love should prevail right?  But leaving the family fortune.  If he opens a new hotel (not associated with his father's hotels) in Brazil and reunites with his mother then that would be fantastic.  It is not going to be easy.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 05:36 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I also have to agree that I was very disappointed with James and Keyshias' hour of "diddley squat" lol...nothing accomplished! James is so sweet and Keyshia really sort of irks me for some reason,she doesn't know what to do with a man like James and I guess their two very different worlds and backgrounds do make a big difference.Their happy ever after doesn't seem possible at this point and why do they even deal with their "significant" others when they can't either stand them or get treated like crap by them"Keyshia"!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:49 pm

Title: Chapter 15

She is dumb as fuck. I don't know if I can continue reason this story when it's like me 99% of the time asking myself how she could be so stupid. I wait for updates because at first something was really going on and it was good. Now it seems like you're just dragging this story out. Maybe it's been a while since the story talked about why she can't do relationships, but I believe it was resolved when he made her feel beautiful? Alright, she's beautiful. Now what? Why is she running away from Jason now? Its getting to the point when I don't even want her to be happy. If the main conflict revolved around the family's problems... Then maybe, but the whole problem with her running away from her true feelings without any true reasons behind it, doesn't make me feel good about your story. Sorry. 



Author's Response:

wow, um....sorry that you didn't like it. keyshia cannot be with jason because of other things beside hiding her feelings. she doesn't want to risk falling and love and being in a relationship with someone who she knows isn't going to be endgame. like i've talked about before, she doesn't want to be famous. she wants absolutely nothing to do with that life. she doesn't want to be hated by others even if she's in a relationship with the man she loves. it's not because he makes her 'feel pretty'. i don't think she's ever had a problem with that. 

she's a good person. a good realistic person. since a lot of my reviews are getting a little bad i think i'll change something up so thanks for your honesty :)

Reviewer: Maxanon Anonymous star [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 12:05 pm

Title: Chapter 15

she's sickening now, Jason needs to fall in love with Al and move on 

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 09:35 am

Title: Chapter 15

I want to hit Eric with a frying pan sooo bad!!! I cant believe him.

Key and Jay need to sort this out now, for real.

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 07:18 am

Title: Chapter 15

I want Eric to storm the Office and go after Jason! Make a scene then Jason will be forced to admit he wants Keyshia in front of everyone and then they can be together!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 15

Jason needs to put his foot dwn with his family. I'm sure he has enough cash to live comfy without their money dictating his life. Keisha boyfriend is about to go ham but for some reason I think he is shady. I can't wait for them to drop their significant others. 

 

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:54 am

Title: Chapter 15

good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 15

Why oh why is she running away now? Did him saying the almost I love you frighten her? I'm confused, and Eric needs to let her go.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 15

I want Keisha to stop being stupid and give her relationship with Jason a chance.  He can hire bodyguards to protect her.  I so want her to get rid of Eric I really don't appreciate him putting his hands on her.  Great update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:17 am



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