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Title: Chapter 19

She pregnant!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 09:30 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Jason's father is an asswipe and a racist to boot!! What the hell was a Cynthia's visit about?  What did Cynthia and Jasmine show up?   How cruel, I hope that something really bad happens to those two women because they don't deserve anything good to happen to them.  Great update, I thought that I had left a review.  Lol

Thanks for this amazing udate!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 07:12 am
Title: Chapter 19

Her Grandmother and cousin sure have a lot of nerve! Pregnant Keyshia. I hope she tells Jason and I believe he will be happy.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 05:28 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Damn, I knew people were a trip, but damn. First his father and that "she is not good enough" BS, then her grandmother with her sneaky, money hungry, prejudice, wanna be ass, trying to play the guilt/synpothy trip on Keyshia. You have to do something really ugly to them two, and quickly!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 04:46 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Thanks for the update. Awww...looks like they have a bundle of joy coming there way. By the way, his Dad is a douchebag.

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 09:07 am
Title: Chapter 19

Nice update...please do not let them breakup....

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 06:10 am
Title: Chapter 19

I just want to know what that old hag got?

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 05:26 am
Title: Chapter 19

Oh snap  throwing up breast our sore mmmmmmmm something is in the oven big time.  Now glad she told off that fake grand ma and cousin. Left her in the cold now all the sudden you want to be her best friend please. Thank for the update and happy new year.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 04:26 am
Title: Chapter 19

Love the chapter. Please post soon. 

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 03:50 am
Title: Chapter 19

Yaaaay she's preggerzzzzz! ahhh love this story! :)

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 03:00 am
Title: Chapter 19

It seems like fate is working it's magic. Thanks for the review.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 02:39 am
Title: Chapter 19

Good update-you could feel the emotions through the writing.  I cannot believe she is pregnant; I did not see the story going in that direction but nonetheless, I suppose it should be interesting to see the rest of the story unfold.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 02:21 am


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