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Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

Keep up the good work & update soon..please.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 17 2013 02:44 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

Fantastic this story is awesome

 Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 03:23 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

i cant wait on the end ive been following your story for some time now...its soooo good

 Reviewer: tiffany york Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 11:12 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

My only comment is, I wish this story wasn't about to end so soon! This is a great story from the first sentence to the last! Whatever you write from this point on I will read.

I will be a fan for life! 



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awwww!! you're a sweetheart! thank you so much

i feel so honored :)) this gives me so much motivation!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2013 01:15 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

Lovin' your story. So sad about Jason's mom and her unhappy ending with Jason's father.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 13 2013 07:01 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

Loved the update and the fact that he and his mom are in a good place.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2013 06:16 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

This update was truly worth the wait.  I hope that everything will all work out in the end.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2013 01:30 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

so good u rock more soon

 Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2013 12:09 am
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

love this story, great to see that you're back

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2013 07:57 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

I'm glad that she said yes and they are getting married and going to have a baby. I love the talk she had with jason's mother and breaks my heart what that woman went thu with Jack Jr he was so  cruel to her. I cant' wait to Keisha has that talk with him. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2013 05:22 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

Looking forward to the epilogue! Great update and love them together.

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2013 03:45 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

Jack is an asswipe how could Alessandra still love him?  I can't wait for this conversation, Keyshia will chew him up and spit him out!  I hate to see this end as it was so good. I am that she told Jason that she was preggers and he reacted just like I thought he would. Jason is a good man unlike his father! Jason is a real man!  Good job!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2013 02:50 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

I love the story however, I hope that Jason man's up more..He comes off as a weaker of the two personality which long term can be a problem. Great update, thanks!

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2013 02:36 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

I enjoyed meeting Alessandra and finding out her side of what happened. I do wonder what happened after those 8 years to make Jack change so drastically? I'm sad to see this end but glad a HEA looks to be in sight for Keyshia and Jason. 

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2013 01:04 pm
Title: Chapter 21-Part 1

Thank you for the update....I love jason's mother..please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2013 08:18 am


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