Title: Chapter 5: Meetings

So Allegra is guarded as is Chris because of past loves?



Author's Response:

Yes, but they have different reasons. Allegra still loves her late husband and being in love with someone else is the same as cheating on him. Chris gave up on love when his fiancée cheated on him. He doesn't want to experience heartache ever again.

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 05:05 pm

Title: Chapter 4: 'Notte In Bianco'

I loved this chapter. Allegra stopping in the middle OMG!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol. I could feel Chris' frustration when I was writing it. That is the reason why he makes that awful comment about her needing someone else to christen her car.

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 04:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6: Friendship mixed with Italian Food

I absolutely love this story. It has just the right amount of comedic factor and it makes it easy to fall in love with the characters. I love it.



Author's Response:

Aww. Your review has made me happy. Thank you for loving the story. I love it too. Not because I am writing it, but because I really like Chris and I just want him to be happy. :D Thank you lots for reviewing. You rock.

Reviewer: E.p Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 04:23 pm

Title: Chapter 5: Meetings

Chris and Allies are apart of each others like and not know it. His friend, his sister, and I am thinking Allies's father and mother. Who is Blake?



Author's Response:

Next chapter will give you an overview of who Blake is. And yes, it's pretty crazy they know a bit about each other withouth knowing that they know each other.

Thank you for reviewing. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 10:40 am

Title: Chapter 5: Meetings

Glad Laurence gave Chris his space. It was getting annoying. Hmmm, wonder if Blake is the reason she running hot and cold to Chris?? Chris needs to continue to give her space as she doesn't seem ready to deal with him. Hope she doesn't hurt him.

Author's Response:

I know. Laurence was really getting on everyone's nerves. But try to understand him. He knows Chris so well and he just wants him to be happy, even though Chris doesn't want to listen to him. He clearly was in denial before. Now he admits that he wants her.

Blake is...well I can't tell you exactly, but you'll find out in the next chapter, so don't worry.

And Chris will give her space...to some extent. I just can tell you that Allegra and he will be close friends....maybe more?

Thank you for reviewing. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 09:03 am

Title: Chapter 3: Green-eyed Monster

Its an interesting story so far but why is Laurence so pushy? He needs to back off a bit and let things happen naturally. I get that they are friends but Chris just seems to give into every suggestion of Laurence eventhough it makes him uncomfortable. Allegra seems to be an interesting person but I guess time will tell if things really work out for them.

Author's Response:

Laurence is a bit of a jerk. Chris listens to him, although it doesnt want to admit. Laurence is Christopher conscience. He knows his best friend and figures out immediately that he likes Allegra, even though Chris in denial. He just wants his friend to be happy, however, it doesn't understand that he really is annoying and that Chris can't stand him when he acts like that.

Will things even work about between then? I can just tell you that they'll have a sort of friendship for a while...will it blossom? Who knows.

Thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 08:42 am

Title: Chapter 5: Meetings

I love this story I love all the characters.. I can relate to all of them...please update soon



Author's Response:

Aww. Thank you. I'm glad that you can relate to the characters. I'm so happy!

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 08:04 am

Title: Chapter 5: Meetings

Right now I am not feeling Allegra, she's a punk!!  I am glad that Laurence apologized to to Chris, he's treating that heifer better than he's treating Chris and he's know Chris longer.  That is just so wrong!!  Will that punk Jack so how up anymore? 



Author's Response:

Thank Lord, we won't see Jake for a long while. Unfortunately he will reappear, but let us not concern us with that douchebag.

Yeah, where does loyalty lie? Laurence is torn apart between his two best friends. He wants them to be together, but he was bugging Chris in an insane manner. But he just wants them to be happy. At least let's give him that.
Allegra is annoying, and a bitch at the moment but maybe you'll like her in the near future?

Thank you for reviewing. I really appreciate that you took the time to let me know what you think.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 02:21 am

Title: Chapter 5: Meetings

I need for Chris to learn how to put 2+2 together. He didn't get it with Allegra working at the UN and he's not getting it now with having seemingly worked with her father years ago?? I'm glad Laurence apologized and resolved to do better and we're getting some clues as to why Allegra can be a raging bitch at times. Who is Blake? A past love who died and broke her heart? That would explain why she's so guarded and so against starting something with Chris. She may really see the potential greatness of her feelings for him and is fighting her hardest not to let him in. I'm not sure but what I do know is I'm hooked :D Great job!



Author's Response:

Your review just made me sighed in happiness. You figured out a lot. That's all I can tell you. I don't want to spoiler...but I'm glad that you picked out that Chris really lacks basic common sense. He's an intelligent guy and everything, having degress and masters, he is formidable when it comes to maths and economics and any logical reasoning, but when it comes to dealing with life he's so bloody pointless that it hurts. I'm happy that it came across. That's what I wanted. Someone who cant deal with everyday life problems and complicates everything.

Laurence is much more fun now, I guess. Less a jerk, more a friend.

You'll find about Blake in the next chapter. And yes, he is the reason why she's guarded. She doesn't need love. She's happy the way she is. I think that is the similarity between them. They are happy with their lives and they don't want changes. Allegra will fight to not let him in. You'll see it more and more as we go along.

Thank you for the amazing review.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 4: 'Notte In Bianco'

Wow, Allegra that was all kinds of wrong!!  I am really not  liking that heifer, playing with Chris's feelings like that.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I know right? I can totally hate her for a while. But then, at the end of the day, she basically told him that she overheard it plain and simple and her vanity has been wounded. Although he is a good piece of meat, Allegra doesn't want to want him, if you know what I mean? Hot and everything, she wants to keep her distance. She doesn't need any complication in her life, and Chris seems to be a calamity.

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 02:08 am

Title: Chapter 4: 'Notte In Bianco'

I especially liked this chapter. We got to see both of them with their defenses down for the most part and just letting the attraction have it's way. I was irked with Allegra at first for stopping the action but I think it was for best. Chris was/is still in that hit her and quit her frame of mind but in the end, I think he's finally starting to realize that she is destined to be more to him.



Author's Response:

Chris doesn't want to admit that he likes her not only on the physical level. He's just using an excuse to cover for his feelings. I guess that's pretty obvious and pathetic from his part. However, he needs stability and security so he's costantly repeating to himself that he just wants sex and then he'll be okay, back to his life. Obviously, that won't happen. At the end of the day, we've seen how Allegra has a huge impact on his life. Yeah, he's attracted, but his feelings go much deeper than that. I'm just happy that he will see the light. You'll see that in the next chapter.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 02:04 am

Title: Chapter 3: Green-eyed Monster

Lord, do something about that fool Laurence.  He is annoying and Allegra is just being a bitch.  That ahole Jack deserves to a beat down, how dare you show your face after you Christopher's girlfriend.  Jack is a piece of work!!!  I would relish a pairing with Allegra and Jack but hell I don't hate her that much.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you reviewed, and I'm happy that the story incited those emotions in you.

Yep. I agree with you. If I could I would totally beat him down...maybe in the future it might happen, who knows?

Laurence is an ass, but he's also a valuable friend. I promise that he will get better, however, that would happen only after he gets worse.

Allegra is a bit of a bitch, I have to admit, but she'll get better. You might even get to tolerate and like her for a while...then it's probably going to be hate. I hate her at the moment, but that is much later on, so don't worry about it. :D

Thank again for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it.

Kisses.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 09:44 pm

Title: Chapter 3: Green-eyed Monster

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I like the chemistry between the two but I don't understand why he says Allegra isn't his type. He's been maintaining that since sight and I'm wondering why? I'm still trying to figure out Allegra's attitude. Thank you for updating so quickly and keep them coming.



Author's Response:

There is chemistry indeed! Allegra is not his type. Chris is not known for dating outside his race. He doesn't have anything against black women. And he really seriously dated only his ex, Caterina who was the typical Mediterranean: olive skin, dark hair and eyes. A bit latina, we could say. He thought that was his type....and then he found himself attracted to Allegra. And then he doesn't want to like anyone at the moment. He loves the single life and wants to stay single until he'll have to settle down more because of necessity than love. Thank you for reviewing. Next chapter up in a few minutes.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 08:54 pm

Title: Chapter 2: One track mind

The sparks are starting but Allie is fighting. Liking so far.  On to the next one.



Author's Response:

Allie is really complicated. She will fight and she will try to keep her heart guarded by scratching and everything. I love and hate her. And I loved the rhyme by the way.

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 06:18 pm

Title: Prologue

Interesting start. On to Chapter 1 I go.



Author's Response:

Thanks for finding the time to review. I really appreaciate it. Let me know what you think.

Best,

Adi Milano.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 04:37 pm

Title: Cast Pictures

Oooh, undertones of Pride & Prejudice - I love contemporary Austenite stories!



Author's Response:

Finally someone got it! Yep This story has been inspired by amazing Pride and Prejudice. However, it is vastly different from the original, not only because it is not set in the Regency era, but also because of extra drama and all.

Thank you for reviewing. I really aprreciate it.

Reviewer: ABBNony Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 03:35 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Miss Allegra Carter

See that is what you get for trying to push people together when they are not ready and for easedropping you never here something you like. Definetly a good story!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reviewing. I'm so happy you liked it. Laurence is a bit crazy. I'm sorry to announce that he will only get worse, but then maybe, he'll understand that he has to step aside and let poor Chris leave his life.

Reviewer: KrisS Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 1: Miss Allegra Carter

Allegra must have heard what Christopher said, Laurence should have left well enough alone.  Allegra snapping on Christopher like that, he didn't deserve it. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

When one of my closest friends read the story, she hated Laurence. He's a bit of a stuff-my-nose-in-everybody's-businesses type of person. I do agree with you, Allegra shouldn't have listened, Laurence shouldn't have pushed, and clearly Allegra is over-reacting. Christopher is a socially-awkward guy, after all, and he loves his privacy. He rarely fit in with the croud and hates expressing his feelings in public.

Thank you very much for reviewing. And for the encouragement.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 02:33 am

Title: Prologue

What did Christopher do garner Allegra's hate?  I am so intrigued please continue.



Author's Response:

Clearly Allegra is in a horrible mood because she probably feels hurt by what Chris has said. At the end of the day, he wounded her vanity and pride. I'm so happy you liked it. And I'm going to post today, YAY!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 02:20 am

Title: Cast Pictures

Nice pictures!!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you. It took me ages to find the perfect picture for each character.

Reviewer: yummy954 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 12:34 am



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