Title: Chapter 4: 'Notte In Bianco'

OMG THAT SCENE WAS HAWWWWWWWWWWWWWT! I really thought they were going to get it on in the car.



Author's Response:

Sorry. Her car will be christened in another occasion. :D

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 11:01 pm

Title: Chapter 3: Green-eyed Monster

I can't stand guys like Jake...I wouldn't even dare to show my face. Descarado!



Author's Response:

Jake is an ass and I hate him! That's all I got to say. He wasn't even in love with Caterina. He just wanted to bed her regardless of Chris' 10 years relationship with her.

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Date: July 27 2012 11:00 pm

Title: Chapter 2: One track mind

I am glad they have a common ground...hopefully it will bridge them together.



Author's Response:

Or maybe not? Lol.

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Date: July 27 2012 10:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Miss Allegra Carter

I couldn't stop laughing after seh told him off. 

 

I can totally relate to Christopher; I keep things in because it hard for me to share my thoughts so I use sarcasm to communicate. :)



Author's Response:

So you're a bit like me! Lol. I share my thoughts alright but not my feelings.

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Date: July 27 2012 10:55 pm

Title: Cast Pictures

no offence, but this is not a very good story. I find it overly melodramatic for no absolute reason. The characters are to old for the rubbish they are both doing and they do not seem to understand each other.. While I understand stand that this is your story to write pls construt it a little bit better before you put it out there for people to read. Putting out sub par work is one of my pet peeves, i would rather you don't put anything out at all.



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your constructive criticism. This is one of the reason why I found the courage to post my story. I wanted to know what people think. I want to improve it as much as I can. So thanks. :)

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 08:37 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Face to face with my weakness

Adi

I still love thsi story and stalk it for updates several times a day.  Well now Ms. Allegra will know what it feels like to be left there.  I cannot wait for the next update with healed Chris and hurt/ashamed Allegra.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy Chris is fine. I almost feel sorry for Allegra. Almost.

Thank you lots for reviewing. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 07:51 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Face to face with my weakness

Thank you Chris!! It took him long enough to put his big boy underoos on and tell Allegra the truth. She's selfish and at this point undeserving of his love. Although, why would she think that Chris was joking when he put his heart on the line? That would be totally out of character for him and he's exhibited none of the traits of a player. The sex was inevitable and good for Chris. He was able to show her what she's missing out on and then leave. He does need to work more on him and his self esteem, as does Allegra.  I'm still wondering about Allegra's relationship with her mother and what's the disconnect there?



Author's Response:

She didn't want to believe that what he was saying was true. She didn't want him to love her because she knows well that she cannot cope with the idea of loving someone else that is not her late husband Blake.
I think it is pretty clear that she loves him after this last chapter. However, Chris won't see it as we know he just don't notice stuff like that.
About her mother...she loves her to bits, however, her mother never approved of her marrying so young and they have been a bit estranged since then. When her husband died, Misaki has been trying to get her to open up to the idea of dating again to no avail. She even tried to set her up with some good men but Allegra just hated it all.

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Date: July 27 2012 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Face to face with my weakness

I just can't believe the audacity of Allegra, she had the nerve to be hurt that no one would tell her where Chris went.  After you broke his heart, how lame is it to say that she thought that he was joking!  Heifer please!!!!  Then she's throwing these questions at Chris like she has the right.  Allegra makes me so angry, Chris you are better off without her.  So Chris and Kristen's father is feeling some guilt about his treatment of Chris?  I don't believe it!  Great update, you know that I am greedy.  So more please!!



Author's Response:

Richard Fitzwilliam, aka Chris' father = Bully. I hope he is really genuine. I don't want him to hurt Chris ever again. I guess it is pretty much impossible for them to build a father-son relationship but you never know.
Allegra is now showing her true feelings for Chris. She still cannot bring herself to love him, even though she clearly does, but she acts like some sort of wronged ex-girlfriend. Hopefully she will get better, because I am starting to hate on her as well.

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Date: July 27 2012 07:01 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Face to face with my weakness

Very interesting twist...great that Chris is handling Allegra better this time around. tho now i wish for some peace between them. nice character developments for the others, particularly interesting for Isobel and Kirsten....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Yep, Chris is growing a back-bone. YAY!

Reviewer: crimsonred Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Face to face with my weakness

Interesting. Laurence and Allegra made up, at least I think they did since she was in the wedding. Not a smart thing to do having sex, with all the anger they have with each other. Besides her husband dying, there has to be something else in her past that has her acting like this. Great update.



Author's Response:

He tolerates her. He didn't forgive herr for hurting Chris, and if it were for him she wouldn't be in the wedding, but because Allegra is also Giselle'ss best friend...you know what that means.

I don't know about something else being the cause of her acting like a bitch. We'll see about that.

Thank you very much for the real nice review. :D

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 06:40 pm

Title: Chapter 13: Summer, Sun and Parties

Please tell me that even though if Allegra apologize to Chris, he won't give in to her too easily and give her a hard time. She is acting like a total bitch. I can understand the she is scared and all that to admit her feelings for Chris. But her behavior was unacceptable and disrespectful. She could have at least open her mouth and tell him "I'm sorry Chris, I can't do this, its too soon" or something. Instead she treated him as crap. And right after sleeping him with and making him confess his love for her. I'm sure he must have felt like a I felt like a cheap hooker who didn’t get paid because she didn’t do a good job. Or even worst. I really don't like Allegra. And as the story progress I dislike her more and more. Chris deserves a lot better. I'm glad that at least he is having fun and living his life instead of sulking in a pity party.



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you for the review. Of course she needs to work for his love. She seriously treated him as if he was nothing. But Chris still loves her even after whatt she did. However, he is aware of the pain she caused him so he is not going to give into her easily, of that I am sure.

Reviewer: Anony Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 13: Summer, Sun and Parties

I am glad that Catarina apologized, but friendship would be a no go.  I can't wait for his friends to come an visit him.   Giselle whose side are you on?  Who cares that Allegra said that she misses him she deserves to miss him.  Giselle it seems that you've picked her side so you just need to keep your trap shut.  No one wants to hear about Allegra missing jack as it's her fault that they are apart.  Don't like Allegra and I am starting not to care for Giselle.



Author's Response:

Giselle is neutral, like Switzerland. She stays friends with both of them and tries to make them reason. Unfortunately we don't know what she is telling Allegra because we're reading Chris' side of the story. She wants them to be happy together. She disapproves of Allegra's behaviour but she can't really do much to change her mind. It's Allegra that is messing everything up.

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Date: July 26 2012 11:26 pm

Title: Chapter 12: Finding solutions to problematic problems

Allegra's family is nice and sweet, what else happened to her that caused her to be such a bitch?  I love how Laurence has kicked Allegra to the curb, that is what that heifer deserves to be lonely without any friends accept for Giselle.  Go away lick your wounds Chris.

Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

Chris has been there for Laurence since they were kids. Allegra came up later. Laurence loves both of them, but he knows that Allegra is being crazy because everyone knows that she loves Chris. He just wants them to be happy, and he is so mad at Allegra for breaking Chris' heart that he got into a big ass fight with her about it and is simply ignoring her. He wants her to at least apologize for her horrible behaviour.

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Date: July 26 2012 11:20 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

I was hoping that sex would lead to her leaving her bitch tendencies behind, but I see that I was mistaken.  I was feeling empathy for the lose of her husband due to illness but now I feel nothing but an intense dislike.  Chris I am so proud that you told your sperm donor about himself and that you resigned your job.  That's right Chris do the things and the people (nudge, nudge, wink wink) that make you happy.  Forget about that tramp, but I do hope that apologizes for treating a man that she said was a friend like trash!!!

Don't like Allegra!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your amazing reviews. They cheer me up as usual. Chris is awesome. He finally found the strength to tell the old man that he can go to hell for all he cares. Who knows what will happen next? Maybe Allegra will have a change of heart.

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Date: July 26 2012 11:16 pm

Title: Cast Pictures

I'm glad he is leaving the past behind, now if someone in the future would only let him in. Laurence has to let things take it's course, because he can't force anyone to do something they are not prepared for. Allegra and he go way back, I wouldn't want to lose either one of those friendships. He needs to stay friends with them and just cheer them on from the sidelines, and hope one of them comes to their senses and soon.

Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Well it's Allegra that has to come to her senses now. After all, Chris told her how he feels.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 10:32 pm

Title: Chapter 13: Summer, Sun and Parties

Laurence, should stay out of the relationship part of it. That is for Allegra and Chris to figure. I don't see why he felt the need to break up his friendship with her, I thought they were the best of friends? Cate had plenty of time in the 10 years they were together to let him know her feelings, without sleeping with his best friend.

 



Author's Response:

Laurence wanted to stay out of it until he saw Chris heartbroken just because Allegra refuses to admit that she loves him. Yes, both Chris and Allegra are Laurence's best friends but he just couldn't take the fact that they would be unhappy due to Allegra's behaviour. He didn't want to see a heart-broken Chris ever again, and still....

Cate is annoying, but I appreciate the fact that Chris now has closure and can stop feeling any sort of resentment towards her. This was a great step. He is growing up, and he's leaving the past behind.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 08:56 pm

Title: Chapter 12: Finding solutions to problematic problems

Loved it. His dad hates him because his mom died, so sad. He should cherish him. She died giving him the son he wanted, this is a piece of her. When he sees his son, he should be able to see and feel her and what she sacrificed for him. Maybe he'll find love!



Author's Response:

Chris will explain more about all this later on. :D

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 04:03 pm

Title: Chapter 12: Finding solutions to problematic problems

I like this Chris a lot.  Taking charge of his life and not how others want it to be.



Author's Response:

I think he's awesome! Go CHRIS!

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 04:00 pm

Title: Chapter 12: Finding solutions to problematic problems

Côte d'Azur ! wow another of my favourite place to escape from the harsh winter here..sigh, wish I was going with Chris...but Applause!! Chris is taking back his life. can't say i miss Allegra tho....many thanks for the great update, as always :)



Author's Response:

Well you're not the only one who is not missing Allegra. But he does. Poor Chris. I wish I could do something to make him better. :'(

Reviewer: crimsonred Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 01:53 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

Poor Chris. I feel bad for advising him to tell Allegra his feelings now. I can't feel sorry or feel any sympathetic feelings for her. She acted jealous and like a b*tch behind Isobel, she pushed until he told her what he wanted and then just abandoned him. I know that this reinforces all the feelings of low self-esteem and self worth that he already has. I wouldn't blame him if he became completely disillusioned behind women. I mean, he told her he loved her to the point of death....I can't get forgive her myself.



Author's Response:

I can feel his pain. I wouldn't wish what he is going through on my worse enemy. And I agree with you. She just contributed to crush further his self-esteem. Will he ever forgive her if she asks him to get together? Who knows.

Thank you for your amazing review.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 10:38 pm

Title: Chapter 10: Family ties and Jealousy

Chris is not only blind but he's deaf too. Did he not hear what his sister just said? He can be quite self-absorbed at times. The answer is right in front of you but you choose to continue searching needlessly. Allegra needs to act like the grown woman that she is and stop the high school antics. If you like him, he's not a mind reader (not even close obviously lol) so just let him know.



Author's Response:

Yes, Chris is oblivious and clueless to what goes around him but don't blame him for it. He'll never get it. He'll never be able to see things unless Allegra tells him what she feels for him when she'll admit that she has feelings for him. I guess that is because he never really got around having a real self-esteem so he doesn't see things because he oesn't believe in them happening.

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Date: July 24 2012 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

Allegra is finally admitting that she has feelings for Chris.  Now will Chris tell her that he is in love with her?  It's about to on like a pot of neck bones!!! So awesome, but I am forever greedy so I must say more please!!!



Author's Response:

Well, I don't really know if she admitted that she has feelings for him. Maybe she just confessed that she wants to have sex with him, you know?

So you can stand Allegra now?

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Date: July 24 2012 09:41 pm

Title: Chapter 10: Family ties and Jealousy

You are the awesomest, I love this story.  There may be a chance for Allegra to come up in my estimation.



Author's Response:

Really? I'm happy to hear that but I believe that it is short-lived.

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Date: July 24 2012 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

I feel so bad for Chris. He doesn't deserve this kind of treatment, no one does. She wanted him to be honest with her and now that he did, she just leaves without saying anything? I get that she is confused and still loves her late husband. But she doesn't need to act like such a bitch. So having sex is okay but when emotions are involved its not okay anymore?
Please don't let Chris go running after her and beg for her to take him. I'm sorry but Allegra doesn't deserve it. He needs to leave her alone. Its her lost anyway. And when she comes back, he needs to give er a piece of her own medicine. Let her suffer a little and then after that give her a chance. She needs to learn that she is not the only one who is suffering. I don't like Allegra at the moment.



Author's Response:

Thank God Chris has some dignity. He thinks that she doesn't love him at all so there's no point in her being with him if that would make him unhappy.

The way she treated him is almost inhumane. She didn't even consider him and the fact that she didn't respond seems to suggest that she doesn't really care that much to even say no to him. I agree. He shouldn't give her a chance if she'll ask for it easily. She doesn't really deserve it.

And don't worry. I don't like Allegra either.

Thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 08:50 pm

Title: Cast Pictures

No I don't hate her, just waiting patiently for her to finally open up and share with him her feelings.



Author's Response:

Will your patience run out? If I have to tell you the truth, yes, it will run out. Before they meet again time will pass. That's all I can tell you.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 07:54 pm



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