Wow, killing his father!!, what a turn of events!! He claims to love Aza and Carla. Hope they all can make it work eventually.

I enjoyed this chapter. 

Hmm, when did Vita decide that he loved Carla? I haven't read a single indication of that. It would be nice if there were more scenes of them getting to no each other, and perhaps a with only Vita and Carla. Again, Vita is something else. I wonder how Aza's going to feel when his father dies. 

The story has good movement, but it's a tad rushed. I don't think it should move slower, but I think you should spend a little more time on the character's bonding. I don't want them to fall in love over night, but the story is lacking a little depth. 

Also, her gown was a tad confusing as Aurora's gown doesn't hug her hips. I'm so over these snooty Aliens. I hope she puts them in their place soon.