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Title: Chapter 5

It's been 24 hours. Where's Chap. 6? Update SOON!! PLEASE!!

 Reviewer: CurlyQ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 10:09 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Not only is he a boss he is a flirt.  More please

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 05:54 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Short and to the point.

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Date: July 25 2012 05:45 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I like this too.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 05:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I am liking this so far. I will sontinue reading so I can see where this goes.  BTW I am putting this one on my tracking list.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Nice start. Btw nic Carly Rae Jepsen reference at the bottom. Lol.

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Date: July 25 2012 02:45 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Very interesting story. 

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 01:57 pm
Title: Chapter 5

love it keep going

 Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 06:56 am
Title: Chapter 5

Yoshidhide is a hot mess and I love it.  This is going to be an interesting ride.  How will Mr. H react when he sees that his step brother is interested in Nia?  I am waiting with baited breathe for the next update.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 06:14 am
Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for a great update.  Yoshihide seems to be more charming than his cousin.  I thought that they were half brothers.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 06:07 am
Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for a great update.  So his half brother took over his father's company.  I hope that they don't use Nia as a pawn in their feud.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 06:04 am
Title: Chapter 5

You are just too cruel for giving us this nugget then leaving us hanging. Totally falling for this story . Good update . : )

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 05:21 am
Title: Chapter 5

OMG, what is going to happen now. Two brothers and one woman, threesome!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:48 am
Title: Chapter 4

She bumped into the half brother. This should be interesting, since he seemed to be interested in her too.

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Date: July 25 2012 04:43 am
Title: Chapter 3

Rivalry between the brothers. She better not botch it!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 2

I like Jesse, but I would not be listening to her right now. If she knows how Nia feels about him, she should be getting that same vibe from him about her.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:33 am
Title: Chapter 1

He isn't firing her, because he is interested.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:24 am
Title: Chapter 5

That was nice of Yoshihide. Nia is in so much trouble with two brothers into her. I'm so jealous. :-)  I can't wait for the next chapter.

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:20 am
Title: Chapter 5

yes he is a boss... I want one LOL

 Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:15 am
Title: Chapter 5

A boss he is indeed. I like him. I'm not sure if Nia does, but I do...

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:07 am
Title: Chapter 5

Awwww yayyyy they meet again!

 Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 04:07 am
Title: Chapter 4

Good story . I'm liking it a lot . More please . ;)

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 02:32 am
Title: Chapter 4

Yes, I am a perv and proud. LOL That being said. I can't wait to see how the relationship between the three of them plays out. I don't have very many critiques other than keeping a sharp eye on spelling. ( very very very very few mistakes ^_^) Great start. I will have more for you when I have more to go on. :)

 Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 02:13 am
Title: Chapter 4

Love it! Please update!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 01:49 am
Title: Chapter 4

Ooooo this is gonna be good! 

 Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 12:24 am


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