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Title: Six-Strategy{an ugly mind is a terrible thing to use}

Damn that was smart...I like him.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 04:26 am
Title: Five- Drawing a line in the sand

Good for him,  glad he told her how he feels.

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Date: October 05 2013 03:58 am
Title: Four- I declare...War {glimpse into the mind of a psychopath}

wow, Carmen is something else. ...

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 02:30 am
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

This chick!

I mean, really! Really!?  How many lives does she have!?!!

Oh no...it's time for Richard to earn his bad-ass credentials and drop that crazy bitch like the overdone-scheming hoe she is. C'mon Richard...handle your woman's business and eliminate that menace-to-society with the quickness!

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 01:16 am
Title: Three Counter-attack and the retreat

Girl, that chapter was too funny! He is the right one for Carmen. I tell you one thing though I'm glad in this story unlike others Nichole is not scared of her sister.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 09:03 pm
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

Yeah!!! 👏👏👏 I'm so glad she got that @$$ whupped!  I hope both Nicole and Audrey watch their backs. 😯

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 05:27 pm
Title: Two -The Invasion

This is actually a very good story, I didn't read it at first because of the description. Well written and it totally kept my attention.  Excellent thanks

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 03:01 pm
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

ok as much i love this story if time for Carmen the bitch reign of terror to end preferably at Halloween

 

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 05:47 am
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

I am glad that Nichole was able to save her mother and whoop her did sister's behind. Carmen is a lunatic. To bad her mother didn't intervene before now. At least everyone is aware of how crazy Carmen is but unfortunately she still has her minions helping her. Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 03:40 am
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

Stop this crazy woman!!

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Date: October 04 2013 02:33 am
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

Great as always. Please don't forget about The Collateral, I love that story too :)

Update Soon!!

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2013 11:01 pm
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

i wish charles didn't pull nichole off of carmen and its official carmen is crazy if she got pleasure seeing her mother suffer, she said she wouldn't have let her die but i believe she would have. looking forward to the next chapter 

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2013 09:00 pm
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

Carmen needs to die a horrible death. Glad that Nichole didnt kill her but somebody she least expects is going to murder that bitch soon.

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Date: October 03 2013 06:57 pm
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

This is the best! can't wait for more

 Reviewer: BritneyKai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2013 06:50 pm
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

Nichole saved her momma and beat Carmen but why did their father stop her from choking her? Her momma should have pressed charges immediately it was that lapse that allowed Carmen to escape. Richard will kill Carmen but I really want Nichole to she deserves to end her life for all of the mean and evil things that Carmen committed towards her. C-I-L-L Carmen!!!

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Date: October 03 2013 06:14 pm
Title: Nine~ The eternal dance of good versus evil

Carmen is one crazy bitch!!!! Be glad when she eats hers.

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Date: October 03 2013 05:54 pm
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

Awww sookie sookie now!!  Somebody is abt to get a well deserved @$$ woopin'.  It's about time. I really hope she doesn't hurt her mom. 

I'm a bit surprised someone hasn't tried to have her committed.

i rely love this story. Well done! 👏😊

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2013 03:08 am
Title: Two -The Invasion

Wow. Carmen sounds crazy. I hope Nicole realizes she belongs in a nut house ! 😳 She had better watch her back. Good story so far. 

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Date: September 28 2013 12:38 am
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!! don't let it end there to not be updated in another 4 or 5 more months.

Kim



Author's Response:

Okay how about three? Just kidding it will not be that long I promise

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 08:56 pm
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

You better not kill the mom!



Author's Response:

I'll tell you a secret she...... Forks and Knives

 Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 04:23 pm
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

I am so happy that you are back, I love all of your stories. I can wait for you to update some more of your stories.

So happy that your back.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad someone likes tham and I will update them all. Forks and Knives

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 09:36 am
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

I am so happy that you are back, I love all of your stories. I can wait for you to update some more of your stories.

So happy that your back.

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 09:36 am
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

I am so happy that you are back, I love all of your stories. I can wait for you to update some more of your stories.

So happy that your back.

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 09:26 am
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

Welcome back. When will Carmen get her due before she cause any more destruction? Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 04:57 am
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

what is wrong with carmen she's really crazy she's willing to kill her mother to get a guy that's not interested in her. i'm glad that nichole and richards relationship is evolving and that she's there to witness anything that carmen has planned. great update and i'm looking forward to the next one.

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 02:34 am


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