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Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

Carmen is crazy and needs to be beaten to death hy Nichole! I really hate Carmen and I jope that her mom and don't eat that. I want Carmen to die! Please let Victoria be okay anot without her uterus. Danny may have dtuoid but he doesn't deserve what Carmen did to him. Forks and Knives you have been missed. More please!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 02:22 am
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

omg someone please cut this bitch she is evil no one will miss her

 Reviewer: kiarah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 01:22 am
Title: Eight- Is this sadistic or is this simply evil

That bitch is so SADISTIC and EVIL!  She has to get the beatdown of her life and let Nichole give it to her, 

what an AWESOME chapter UPdate your other stories PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: The Tacklebox Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 01:11 am
Title: Just Ordinary Cast

Could u please update Red Neck Woman as well as your 

other well written stories it would be greatly appreciated...

Thank u.  :-)

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2013 12:03 am
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

Carmen gets what she deserve for mistreating her sister.. As forest gump would say, ."stupid is as stupid does" 

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 06:19 pm
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

it time for Carmen bs to come to an end all her skeletons need to come out the closet.

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2013 11:08 pm
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

OMG Forks & Knives this read is the best.  I didn't know people could be this crazy and so far misguided as Carmen is.  When will the next epi be?  Will it be Juicy I hope so.  Please hurry I can't wait to read more.

 

 

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Date: March 22 2013 01:35 am
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

hope victoria can distract carmen to where her plan falls apart and i really want nichole to toughen up a bit and doesn't allow her sister to ruin her life any farther 

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2013 10:25 pm
Title: Just Ordinary Cast

great update, can't wait 4 Carmen 2 get what's coming 2 her!

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Date: March 21 2013 08:09 pm
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

So damn refreshing! What the hell can I say? I refuse to nitpick on the fewest grammer errors I have ever seen when the storybis so damn amazingly done. Can't wait to see ahat happens next!

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Date: March 21 2013 02:49 pm
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

I like the title of this chapter because it describe Carmen perfectly. Her time is running out. I can't wait for her to be put down like the RABID *B* she is. Thanks

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Date: March 21 2013 02:27 pm
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

Loved the update! Glad Nichole and Richard are making progress. Hope all of Carmen's plans backfire on her and that this Victoria person gets to give her a reality check too.

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Date: March 21 2013 05:41 am
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

Great so far.

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Date: March 21 2013 04:15 am
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

I really need to know why Richard told Carmen that he was thinking about seeing Danny? That was a stupid move considering how distrustful he is of her to begin with. Why would he say anything to her about the attack on Nichole if he actually thought this man was connected to Carmen in any way. That really didn't make sense to me.

I hope Victoria, Richard, Nichole and Audrey somehow get together and do Carmen in!

Danny needs to make it to bear witness to Carmen and her deeds.

Carmen is just so far gone its unreal! Her hatred for Nichole is epic and she really will take everyone down so long as Nichole is in the numer. Wow!

Nice!

P.S I like the new pic of Nichole better, too.

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Date: March 21 2013 02:15 am
Title: Three Counter-attack and the retreat

:)

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2013 01:41 am
Title: Two -The Invasion

Lol love the mental games. 

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2013 01:19 am
Title: One - Target sighted

:)

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2013 12:41 am
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

Chapter was awesome. I hope Carmen gets her behind kicked, I can't stand the heifer

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Date: March 21 2013 12:20 am
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

I love this story, I want to see Victoria beat Carmen, she is so evil...and delusional...and plain crazy!

 Reviewer: Luna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2013 11:26 pm
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

Welcome back. I love this story please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2013 10:33 pm
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

please finish

 Reviewer: lady tee Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2013 10:28 pm
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

My story is back and Carmen is even more psychotic. I really want Nichole too hand Carmen a ass whopping that she never forget and then I want her under the jail. This update was the sugary!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2013 10:13 pm
Title: Seven- Going off the deep end

Carmen is just stupid! Give it up already, no one wants you!

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Date: March 20 2013 09:27 pm
Title: Just Ordinary Cast

please update soon!

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Date: February 27 2013 03:38 am
Title: Just Ordinary Cast

can we please get an update soon!

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Date: January 17 2013 07:00 pm


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