Title: 3 - Heat

Wow wow wubzi! That last scene was scorching! I wonder who Brantly sensed at the end, obviously he was doin a no-no with our dear Raven. Please continue!

Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 03:52 am

Title: 3 - Heat

Do these girls have an ounce of common sense? I mean, REALLY? 

And Raven... *smdh* Does she not have any respect for herslef? I mean, she doesn't know Brantley from Adam. 

 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 03:32 am

Title: Chapter 2

Hunks galore! I cannot wait to see how this will play out. Great start.

Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 03:26 am

Title: 1 - Storms on the distance.

Great introduction. Hmmmm, wolves maybe?

Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 03:24 am

Title: 1 - Storms on the distance.

Why isn't there more more more really enjoying this read thought she was gonna give it up in the kitchen I guess Elijah called

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 07:08 pm

Title: 3 - Heat

Brantley is a big one! Have a great weekend!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 08:15 am

Title: Chapter 2

Nice picture of Elijah!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 08:05 am

Title: 1 - Storms on the distance.

Nice start!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 07:31 am

Title: 3 - Heat

Rushed it was! Just when it got good! Also Nathans the hottest I want her to hook up with him!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 07:29 am

Title: 3 - Heat

love it :D

Reviewer: star23 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 06:16 am

Title: 3 - Heat

good but too short :(

Reviewer: GUEST Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 06:02 am

Title: Chapter 2

Oh Nards!!! you tease and to leave us with that eye candy pic of Elijah....Aaaargh,lol  Can't wait for more EGML !!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 11:26 pm

Title: Chapter 2

love it all! hope you update soon... very soon

thank you

Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 07:36 pm

Title: 1 - Storms on the distance.

kinda liked Nathan ...that was before Elijah...can't wait for next updated...

Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 11:40 am

Title: Chapter 2

Me like very much

Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 09:56 am

Title: Chapter 2

That was fun! I had a feeling they were werewolves or something! =D

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 08:00 am

Title: Chapter 2

I really enjoyed this! I hope you continue!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 06:49 am

Title: Chapter 2

like:)

Reviewer: GUEST Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 06:29 am

Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting start I can't wait to read more. please update ASAP

Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 05:57 am

Title: Chapter 2

I still can't see the pic of Raven, perhaps you can just post the link?? HOWEVER it does not stop her from being my favorite character thus far. I'm hooked!!

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 05:51 am

Title: Chapter 2

please, please update soon....really good start.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 2

OMG, this is juicy! What's the deal with these men? The vibe is so creepy but sexy at the same time. Please update sooooon!!!

Reviewer: CurlyQ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 04:48 am

Title: 1 - Storms on the distance.

So I'm really really really hoping this is a menage story. With the way you're setting it up...I'm practically foaming at the mouth. I love the update. Thank you for posting.

Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 03:54 am

Title: 1 - Storms on the distance.

i like what you have so far, i guess it's good that raven sense that colton was dangerous but i guess nathan isn't... can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:31 am

Title: 1 - Storms on the distance.

Quick question...where have you been hiding?

this is great stuff...can't wait for the next update...

Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 09:19 pm



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