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Title: Chapter 1

Its been forever! Really missing your writing and this atory! Hoping for two long happy ensing chapters!!! 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 09:34 am
Title: Chapter 1

You came back, and you came back strong. I'm glad Nyla and the baby are ok. Now, the recovery.  

 Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 10:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

The death of Nyla's husband and child was sudden and she did not have the opportunity to say goodbye.  Now that she is in a coma and able to see and talk to them, she may be able to move on if she comes out of the coma.  I know Greg s going to tell her to move on.  It simply won't help living in the past and holding on to something that is no more. Holding on and greiving over something you cannot change.   Poor Gavin, he is trying so hard to  get Nyla to  let him in to her life completely.  I hope love conquers all.

 Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 05:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Wow that was intense. Oh my she came after him & was hit. What next inquiring minds want to know

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Date: October 04 2013 09:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

was there a chapter 20?



Author's Response:

I goofed. I have changed the it to 20

 Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 31 2013 06:47 am
Title: Chapter 1

Tina needs to go somewhere. smh

 Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 06:21 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Still reading. 



Author's Response:

Keep reading and commenting. It definetly motivates me and some interesting things are coming.

 

 Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 11:34 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like where this story is going. There is a nice flow to it so good job!

The only thing that is REALLY distracting is the typos/grammatical errors.

I understand writing on a touchscreen is a b****. But PLEASE spend some time editing before you post. This is a really good story and those errors are unnecessary (missing periods and caps to start a sentence). It's like walking around with your hair unbrushed, its distracting... and takes away from the beauty of the piece. This is seriously only meant as constructive critism. But nice job and I hope you continue to write because your very talented!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 04 2013 09:39 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Gavin invited a snake into his life named Tina. He better be weary of ever being alone in a room with her. I hope he doesn't allow Tina to hurt Nyla through him. I understand his impatience to an extent but I hope he doesn't turn to Tina because he can't wait. It a new relationship. 

I hope Nyla gets stronger and more sure of herself. She deserves to be loved and Greg would want her to move on. She needs to realize that there is more than enough room in her heart to love Gavin and have children. 

 Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2013 07:16 am
Title: Chapter 1

i love this story........i hope her feelings change about not getting married again and having another baby!

Also she needs 2 watch her back with that sister of hers!

 Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2013 05:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

The spelling and grammar need to be reviewed I know you apologized but got back and read & correct. There are just too many errors and they are distracting to the events in the story.

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 12:22 pm
Title: Chapter 1

glad they made up, but i can't but think that there will b more problems 4 them in the future!

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 05:22 am
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I hoping the characters can get past a simple mistake...nice update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 09:15 am
Title: Chapter 1

Please give us more Trent drama.  Thanks for the update!

 Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 04:22 am
Title: Chapter 1

Tell him!!!

 Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 03:11 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Good start to the story. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2012 08:47 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow Nyla is so strong and Gavin seems perfect for her.  Once she realizes that all will be well.  That pool scene though was amazing.  I am LOVIN it!  Trent and Abbey need to GET A LIFE.  I see problems ahead due to them both.  Jos needs to get more facts before she does something crazy and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

 Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2012 09:32 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Another great chapter.  Thank you!

 Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 03:15 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for letting me know, who the pics are.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 04:53 am
Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what happend to her husband and child, and whether or not she blames herelf for it.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 03:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love your dialogue in this first chapter, I couldn't help but chuckle when Gavin  to Nyla, "...you could pretend to think about it." It takes talent to write conversation that easily flows and comes off as realistic. Sprinkle some fairy dust on me, will you please? :)

 Reviewer: Ciggy Burns Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 04:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 02:56 am
Title: Chapter 1

Me likey please continue!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 02:17 am
Title: Chapter 1

A really good start, please contine with this story soon:)

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 02:13 am
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Interested in reading more.

 Reviewer: PrettyinBlue08 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 01:54 am


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