Horrible sister. Wonderful update, he meant well.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: January 10 2013 08:30 pm
That's it? Did I miss something?
Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2013 02:07 am
I hope she puts this heffa in her place... Good update
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2013 01:49 am
Wow, her sister is a piece of work. I hope she gets what she deserves expecting a hand out, which is nothing.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2013 12:04 am
Woman please the errors don't take away from the story! When I read I automatically do the corrections in my head. Besides my grammer isn't perfect either is my typing! I am enjoying this story. Getting beta wouldn't be a bad idea.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 01:55 pm
OMG Tina is awful. Ihope she doesn't cause too much trouble.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 12:51 pm
His heart was in the right place, but his head was somewhere else all together. He's bitten off more than he can chew. He'll remember that he brought that viper into their sphere.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 12:01 pm
Colossal error in judgment here! To presume things over other peoples' family matters is a tricky thing. Assuming that whatever the problem was, it was Nyla's to get over was a mistake. And frankly, I'm kind of offended on Nyla's behalf. He implies she acts like some sort of flighty alarmist. Now, this money-grubbing heifer is in; and Gavin is the one who needs to get her out since he jumped the gun here. Let him deal with her. I also hope Nyla gives him a proper ass-chewing for his slightly haughty assumptions. Heavy-handedness indeed!
And I already see some kind of unholy alliance between Tina and Abbey in their one goal; which would be to get Nyla out. I could totally see Tina doing it for a big payday; since that's why she's there anyway. That, and to make life hell for a sister she's clearly jealous of. That's gravy for her.
However, I will give Gavin one small concession; Nyla could have given him a bitmore information about her family. Just enough so he had a better picture of what was going on with them.
The fur is about to fly now!!!
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 06:04 am
I already hate Tina, I know her persuit of Gavin and his money will blow up in her face but will it cost him Nyla anyway. Gavin you really should have mineded your own business, not all families are close. It's always a reason why that is. Great update as usual!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 05:47 am
Great update!!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 05:40 am
Great update.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 04:11 am