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Title: Chapter 17

Love it

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 10:12 am

Title: Chapter 17

Poor Nyla, what a family she has. Tina and Mom both need to be out of her life permanetly. They don't care a lick for her and I am most shocked at Tina. She is turning out to be just like her mother. What a tool she is. I can't wait for Gavin to come back and hopefully Nyla and Gavin will go unscathed through this next round of jackassery. Thanks

Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 08:19 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Thanks for taking the time to update... This poor chick ever gonna catch a break?

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 12:05 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I'm sorry, but those two vipers would be gone from my presence. Nyla needs to keep those two away from her and Gavin. Tina is f'in delusional. I hope neither Nyla nor Gavin falls for anything she tries to pull.

Great update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 17

more  faster  thank you thank you

Reviewer: D1950 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 11:28 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Loved the chapter, absolutely HATE Nyla's family!  I know more drama is coming, I am bracing for it; please make sure that when all is said & done, someone smacks the shit out of Tina (and possibly mom!)

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 08:18 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I really hate those two, I really wants Nyla to tell those evil heifers off.  She should have gone with Gavin again I feel as if she put her dead family above Gavin. Tina is such a hateful unfeeling *itch, something bad really needs to happen to her.  Please let her make through this with mind and love for Gavin intact. Wonderful up date!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 04:02 pm

Title: Chapter 17

That was sweet with Ava.

Tina really must think Nyla is a complete moron! How is she gonna think she can just break up Nyla's relationship like that? She comes on the scene not knowing her ass from her elbow and because she put some plan into motion, it definitely supposed to work because Nyla is weak and vulnerable like that. Ughh! Really? That might have worked before, but Nyla has come a long since then. My shock would be that any plan to dismantle her and her confidence would work. What thread is she talking about?

And the fact that Tina thinks that its okay to even try to completely ruin her sister mentally to get her out of the way, then say she can just build herself back up again like she's talking about a toy is breathtaking. Who does Tina think she is?

And what's wth that mother of hers?

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 06:38 am

Title: Chapter 17

Enjoyed this update!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 17

Again, another great chapter...I would love to see Nyla to give her mother and sister the ass whipping they need

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 06:13 am

Title: Chapter 17

Mom and sis are a hot mess. Her baby is telling her to move on and be happy.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 05:56 am



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