Reviews For Shattered
Title: Chapter 18

I'm still here... It's been a while since the last update, but I'm 100% sure I'll stick around to the end.

Anyway, great update. I'm hoping Nyla is ready to move on now, Gavin really loves her and he doesn't deserve to be kept in limbo anymore. It's about time for her to take that step to continue living.

Update soon and keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Terri Day Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 07:31 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Please update soon. Really good story. 

I



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.

 

Reviewer: tymes3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 04:54 am

Title: Chapter 18

I'm along for this ride as long as you are, so please keep updating, I aporeciate your efforts and I love this story...

Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement 

 

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 11:00 pm

Title: Chapter 18

i hope she says yes to gavin's proposal; and i'm glad she is dealing with the grief head on.  great story!



Author's Response:

Nyla has more stregnth than most but she is going to need it. Please keep reading and commenting.

Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 08:32 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for finally updating. NY LA is making progress but Tina is still a bitch. Actually Tina is a jealous bitch! So good and now she is thinking an about her man Gavin. So good!



Author's Response:

Tina is a mess. She is so screwed up and doesn't even see it. There is still a few hurdles to overcome but Nyla isn't running scared anymore.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 02:51 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Nyla is a very strong person, i hope she's ready for Gavin's proposal. Tina needs to talk to someone, someone who can get in her thick her & make her realize how insane she is. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

You have more faith than I do if you think anyone can reach crazy Tina. Keep reading to see how Gavin's big plans unfold.

Reviewer: Lindy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 12:14 pm

Title: Chapter 18

I appreciate the update.  Thought provoking and real.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. This was a hard chapter to write because of how much guilt was plaguing Nyla and the selfishness of her old acquaintances.

 

Reviewer: BMore Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 18

I'm still reading it, and still loving it. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I always appreciate your comments. This was one of the hardest chapters for me so I am happy it was well received. Keep commenting and rating. It keeps me motivated when my mind only has static.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 07:25 am

Title: Chapter 18

That was a lot for Nyla to take, and I think she did a good job, considering. Maybe one day she and Drake will meet again.

Greg's relatives are a trip. And I hope those people can understand why did cheked out of life aftewer her family was killed.

Gavin is a fool....lol!

Loved it! Hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

You were the only person who seemed to sympathize with Drake. I'm not going to lie it hard for me to sympathize with him, but Im a grudge holder so. And your right Gavin is a fool.thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 07:21 am

Title: Chapter 18

Excellent chapter! Perfect way to end the weekend!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reading. Please continue to comment and rate. It makes my day.

Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 05:46 am



Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.