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Title: Chapter 20

Just caught up I am glad he is not letting it go, I am personally glad. She needs to decide what she wants she is irritating me now with how she is acting.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2013 03:05 pm

Title: Chapter 20

I'm happy he finally confronted her. You can't have a relationship without trust, and you can't have trust without honesty.

I never understood her reasoning behind keeping everything concerning Greg and her life before meeting Gavin a secret. You're moving on to a new relationship and I understand the loss of a husband and child, but bringing excess baggage along will end the relationship before it begins. Gavin has been understanding and supportive, so I don't get it.

I also think Gavin is a saint, because I wouldn't be with someone that long and put up with that kinda shit. You are not the person you are today without having gone through the things you've been through. So be honest about those things or move the hell on... Thats how I see it.

I hope Nyla finally removes her head from her ass before she loses Gavin for good.

Reviewer: Terri Day Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 04:28 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Oh hell! I hate it when "we" try to stand our ground and try to be tough and be evasive instead of just coming out with the truth instead of trying to prove a point! "He can't tell me what to do!" BS that is why we end up being alone. Please remind Nyla, that they love each other, and to forgo, all the heartache!



Author's Response:

But you know we do it. Talking about he is not going to tell me nothing he is not my daddy even when we are dead ass wrong. Lol.

 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2013 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 20

Nyla is pissing me off. Its to the point where I want to just jump in to the story and slap her. I totally understand that she had lost her husband and child. But she made the choice to be in a relationship with Gavin and her with her stupid secrets all the damn time is going to ruined it. Why is she still so secretive?  At this point I'm asking myself why he is still bothering with her. I'm trying to understand Nyla and be compassionate, but she is making it difficult. Sometimes it seems as if she doesn't care about Gavin's feelings at all. She says she loves Gavin, so then why did she not tell him about Greg's memorial? She keeps hiding things from him, its no wonder that he doesn't trust her and has some insecurities when it comes to their relationship. Why is it so difficult for Nyla to open her mouth and explain who Malik is?  I wouldn't blame Gavin if he decides to leave her. In fact I'm all up for him leaving her ass if she wants to continue with her secret ways.



Author's Response:

Wow. Nyla is definetly being a moron right now but she is really confused as to how to move forward. 

Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 31 2013 04:31 am

Title: Chapter 20

Interesting chapter..

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 31 2013 03:31 am

Title: Chapter 20

Nyla should just tell Gavin the truth that the guy came to use the bathroom. Don't let her sister win.

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 08:26 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Tina is a jealous ho and I am so gals that Gavin had her tossed out on her jealous ass!  Why is NY LA so secretive still? If she loves Gavin why did she keep the memorial for Greg to herself? I want my HEA and Nyla is pissing me off.  Do you know that you went from chapter 19 to 21? Is it just a typo? What were your issues with this chapter? It was well written, but Bylaws"a forward progress has all but ended in this chapter. That is my frustration!



Author's Response:

Tina is a nightmare that Nyla can't wake up from. Thanks for catching the chapter slip up. I will correct it. Please just tough it out its almost over.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 02:27 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter. I think Nyla should come clean and tell Gavin the truth and close that chapter in her life. Also Gavin should tell Nyla about her sister. Then they can get married and have babies!!! Nyla needs closer. 

 

 

Do not like that bitch of a sister!!!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 12:33 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Uh oh Jealous Gavin. I want to beat down Nyla's sister. 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 12:28 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Dayum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 20

she better tell him before she ends up really hurt if she really loves him she would explain to him whats going on instead of having him misunderstand 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 06:34 am



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