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Title: Chapter 22

Aww Man, you can not end this like this. I hope you come back and complete the story. I really enjoyed reading it. I understand that life happens. I am becoming a really big fan of the black female, white male genre, which are REALLY hard to find and so few. Should you respond to this feedback, using your user name and the name of the story I provided the feedback for. 

I am glad that Gavin put both the mother and sister in their place.  I would hate to see him loose her.  

 

 Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3@gmail.com Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 07:51 am
Title: Chapter 22

I hope Nyla wakes up and comes back to Gavin because there is something about Greg that just isn't sounding right and her crazy mother wants to take her off life support... Welcome back

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 10:13 pm
Title: Chapter 22

I just caught up with this story, and I love it! 

 Reviewer: kaci Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 07:54 am
Title: Chapter 22

Another interesting chapter, filled with love heartache and something else. Nyla knows something isnt right she knows that she wants to let Gavin know that she is OK, but she is also torn. Seeing Greg and Ava again was one of the things she wanted most, but it doesnt feel right. That somethimg is missing its not that overwhelming feeling of joy and happiness. It's almost as if its not what will complete her. Hopefully she figures it out before it's too late and she does something that she can't take back. Gavin is dying slowly over this but his parents are right he needs to start livimg for them, acting like they will live and he will have his fsmily. First thing first taking a shower, kicking Nyla's mother to the curb and getting something to eat. How can a mother see her child in a coma and make it about who she thinks Nyla is, she made me want to punch her in the face. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 05:52 am
Title: Chapter 22

I enjoyed it, definitely would like to read more.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 05:14 am
Title: Chapter 22

This update may have been, long awaited, but.....oh so very worth it!  Thank you for it, just don't make us wait, so long again, PLEASE PLEASE,PLEASE!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I was very nervous.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 04:56 am
Title: Chapter 22

i hope she wake up soon!!!

Author's Response:

Me too moreso for Gavin's sake.

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 04:42 am
Title: Chapter 22

Great update



Author's Response:

Thanks

 

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 04:19 am
Title: Chapter 22

This chapter was fantastic! Nyla's mother is some shit ghough and I'm glad Gavin let it be known that he wasn't having it. I can't wait for more, please update soon. 



Author's Response:

Her mother is what you find under your shoe.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 22

That really isn't Greg becasue if he were he would tell her that it isn't her time. Still don't like Trent and her mother is the worse!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 03:20 am


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