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Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

You interchanged Tina and Lisa a lot, but I'm still liking what I'm reading. Please post more more frequently!

 Reviewer: Braided Butterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 09:44 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

It should be noted that regardless of the fact that you have no editor, this is still a beautiful love story. Writers block be damned!

 

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 11:11 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Glad you're back.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 10:16 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Even though I'm on the edge of my seating yelling at the compter asking abot what's next, you can't leave me hanging like that, I also think the way you ended the chapter was great.  It woild have been easy to let the chapter end with Nyla wake up, her and Gavin work things out by her bedside and they live happily ever after.  That would have been too predictable.  I like the way yo ended the chapter becase I feel like this opens you up to taking the story line into many different directions instead of pigeonholing you into an forgone and predictable story and ending.  I'm wating on pins & needles on the edge of my seat holding my breath to see what happens next.

 

CAN'T WAIT!!!!

 Reviewer: ChocolateLovesVanilla Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 06:38 pm
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I hope beyond hope that Nyla and the baby pull through because Gavin will really lose it and will never be the same without them (cries)

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 07:26 pm
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Your story has taken an interesting turn.  You've handled Nyla's perspective beautifully.

 Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 05:17 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I'm glad this story is back. I hope Nyla and hte baby make it.

 Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 05:01 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I am now a writer, so when i read such a great chapter i do not understand you having writers block, i can't wait to see a chapter where you mind is clear and your direction for the story is known to you. wow is all i can say. 

 Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 04:30 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I am so glad to see qn update of Nya and Gavin!!  She has to go back, she got a second chance ar love and family this was meant to be so quit being stupid!!  That heifer Lisa works my last nerve that asshole Trent needs an ass whopping!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 02:02 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Thank you for the wonderful update

 Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:40 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Awesome update!! You are forgiven..lol please update soon!!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:33 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Great job this was beautifully writen so glad she's making it bk to them she deserves happiness & a new beginning

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:24 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I'm glad you posted it because now we can move on to her recovery. Good post. Thanks.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:19 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I loved it.

Trent and Lisa are something different, huh?

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:18 am


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