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Title: Chapter 25

Please oh please oh please oh please update this story soon!  It's amazing!!!  All your stories are freaking fantastic!!!

 Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 07:48 am
Title: Chapter 25

I'm  so thankful you're pushing through your MIA muse.  I'm sticking around to the end even if we're both collecting SSI..Lol   My only request is that you give us a happy ending..This couple deserves that.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2014 04:49 pm
Title: Chapter 25

Very good. I like the realistic conflict in her waking up, not all roses. I feel for Gavin wanting so much from her, hopefully he can be patient with her. I also feel for Nyla she is definitely going through a lot. They both need to start being honest with each other to be able to work through this. Tina needs to leave for a while or just go stay with Trent. Great chapter!

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 07:26 am
Title: Chapter 25

This was a good chapter. It was expected for her memories to be a bit fuzzy and him to have some gulity about the accident. She will remember; however, how she will handle it remains to be see. There is just too many misconceptions and miscommunications with these two. I am hoping for a happy ending. I hope your muse get's back from Bora Bora soon!

 Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 02:45 am
Title: Chapter 25

I like this story.  I hope they can be happy together, but it seems like more problems are on the horizon.  Good story.

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 09:19 am
Title: Chapter 25

I like this story and hope you finish it.

 Reviewer: MrsWifeyS Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 12:03 am
Title: Chapter 25

I think since you are 2 chapters away from the conclusion, you will need to make it dramatic a real cliffhanger!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 06:06 am
Title: Chapter 25

I am so happy Nyla woke up,  but her sister Tina is still a bitch!!  Trent just needs to go away, his punk ass needs to find some  business.  I will reread the chapter where Nyla got hit because I don't know why  Gavin feels guilty? 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 03:22 am
Title: Chapter 25

I think Nyla needs to speak up and tell Gavin how she feels and he needs to so the same. Then Nyla needs to come to Grips with the pregnancy and be happy. They have had so much drama that they need happiness. Great update but still sad. 

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 07:42 pm
Title: Chapter 25

I'm glad you're back. Nyla has long hard road ahead. I hope Gavin tells her the truth at some point so they can stop pussyfooting around!! There were a lot of typos but very good otherwise. I think I need go back and read it from the beginning. Lol

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 07:30 am
Title: Chapter 25

I like this chapter because it feels so realistic.  Not everything will be sunshine and roses after Nyla gets out of the coma.  It's an adjustment for her, Gavin and everyone.  Gavin needs to tell Nyla the truth about everything because she needs to recover the gaps in her story and start to fully heal both mentally and physically.  The mental gaps are gonna drive her more crazy than her physical limitations.  Nyla and Gavin relationship is already rocky with the fact that they don't communicate the way they should and they hold on to too much guilt.  They have gotten better, but they need to work on that together. 

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 06:50 am
Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 05:22 am
Title: Chapter 25

Yay you're back... Great update as always

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 04:18 am
Title: Chapter 25

I'm glad that she is alive and the baby is fine. Gavin fight for your family.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 04:17 am


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