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Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Thank you for the wonderful update

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Date: June 02 2014 01:40 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Awesome update!! You are forgiven..lol please update soon!!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:33 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

Great job this was beautifully writen so glad she's making it bk to them she deserves happiness & a new beginning

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 01:24 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I'm glad you posted it because now we can move on to her recovery. Good post. Thanks.

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Date: June 02 2014 01:19 am
Title: Chapter 23- Letting go

I loved it.

Trent and Lisa are something different, huh?

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Date: June 02 2014 01:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

The death of Nyla's husband and child was sudden and she did not have the opportunity to say goodbye.  Now that she is in a coma and able to see and talk to them, she may be able to move on if she comes out of the coma.  I know Greg s going to tell her to move on.  It simply won't help living in the past and holding on to something that is no more. Holding on and greiving over something you cannot change.   Poor Gavin, he is trying so hard to  get Nyla to  let him in to her life completely.  I hope love conquers all.

 Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 05:03 pm
Title: Chapter 22

Aww Man, you can not end this like this. I hope you come back and complete the story. I really enjoyed reading it. I understand that life happens. I am becoming a really big fan of the black female, white male genre, which are REALLY hard to find and so few. Should you respond to this feedback, using your user name and the name of the story I provided the feedback for. 

I am glad that Gavin put both the mother and sister in their place.  I would hate to see him loose her.  

 

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Date: January 29 2014 07:51 am
Title: Chapter 22

I hope Nyla wakes up and comes back to Gavin because there is something about Greg that just isn't sounding right and her crazy mother wants to take her off life support... Welcome back

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Date: January 14 2014 10:13 pm
Title: Chapter 22

I just caught up with this story, and I love it! 

 Reviewer: kaci Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 07:54 am
Title: Chapter 22

Another interesting chapter, filled with love heartache and something else. Nyla knows something isnt right she knows that she wants to let Gavin know that she is OK, but she is also torn. Seeing Greg and Ava again was one of the things she wanted most, but it doesnt feel right. That somethimg is missing its not that overwhelming feeling of joy and happiness. It's almost as if its not what will complete her. Hopefully she figures it out before it's too late and she does something that she can't take back. Gavin is dying slowly over this but his parents are right he needs to start livimg for them, acting like they will live and he will have his fsmily. First thing first taking a shower, kicking Nyla's mother to the curb and getting something to eat. How can a mother see her child in a coma and make it about who she thinks Nyla is, she made me want to punch her in the face. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: January 14 2014 05:52 am
Title: Chapter 22

I enjoyed it, definitely would like to read more.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 05:14 am
Title: Chapter 22

This update may have been, long awaited, but.....oh so very worth it!  Thank you for it, just don't make us wait, so long again, PLEASE PLEASE,PLEASE!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I was very nervous.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 04:56 am
Title: Chapter 22

i hope she wake up soon!!!

Author's Response:

Me too moreso for Gavin's sake.

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 04:42 am
Title: Chapter 22

Great update



Author's Response:

Thanks

 

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 04:19 am
Title: Chapter 22

This chapter was fantastic! Nyla's mother is some shit ghough and I'm glad Gavin let it be known that he wasn't having it. I can't wait for more, please update soon. 



Author's Response:

Her mother is what you find under your shoe.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 22

That really isn't Greg becasue if he were he would tell her that it isn't her time. Still don't like Trent and her mother is the worse!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 03:20 am
Title: Chapter 21

Please update this story pretty please is so good it just need two or three more chapter or really long one lol....

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 10:21 am
Title: Chapter 21

Thanks for the update!! I hope everything works out for them and for you!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Sometimes couples have most of their hurdles in the beginning and that's the case for these two.

 Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 06:21 pm
Title: Chapter 21

Oh No! Not after all that! You can not be serious! You can not let their last words be a goodbye? Please, don't let it end like this? We need more and more chapters!



Author's Response:

There are definitely two chapters left. Please stick with me.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2013 02:22 pm
Title: Chapter 21

 

Thank u for your update, I'm still with u and can't wait 

until your next update... :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2013 01:40 am
Title: Chapter 21

I feel sorry for Gavin.



Author's Response:

Gavin has been through it but what about Nyla. I'd need a Prozac drip.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2013 06:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Wow that was intense. Oh my she came after him & was hit. What next inquiring minds want to know

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Date: October 04 2013 09:13 pm
Title: Chapter 21

She definitely went about it the wrong way, but I'm glad Nyla is working on herself so she can move on with Gavin. I hope she isn't hurt too terribly bad; they need to reconcile soon! :)



Author's Response:

I think this accident puts  everything in perspective for these two. Thanks for reading

 Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 01:45 pm
Title: Chapter 21

Thanks for the update.  Of course now that this has happened, I hope you update sooner.  LOL 

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Date: October 04 2013 12:20 pm
Title: Chapter 21

I love this story!!! But damn when can Nyla have a break?? 

Awesome update as always!! 

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 05:06 am


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