Good start to the story. Camden is very scary, I hope that Zach and Leila will be safe. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you! And I'll assume you meant Melanie, haha. :)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: September 13 2012 01:41 pm
i love parallels of a brewing storm pls send more my way :}
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Reviewer: domo nicole Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 12 2012 08:31 am
I'm quite intrigued! My heart was clenched for her I'm truly scared for her!
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Melanie will be fine...maybe... ;)
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2012 02:04 am
I have seen this story before but the character names are different. If I remember correctly the new guy was asian male lead in the other story. I love stories that pair an asian male lead with an african american female. But I like it, so please don't kill off Zach. I would love for Melanie to report the threat instead of thinking that Camden isn't capable of murder. The man is violent, take his threats seriously.
More please!!!
Author's Response:
You are correct, I've had this sory up before a while ago. I took it down because I didn't like it. But recently, someone looked over it for me and edited it. They helped put my love back in this story and after changing a few things, I put it back up. I'm surprised you remember it! But anyway, thank you, I appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2012 01:47 am
Nice start, please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2012 11:19 pm