I am really enjoying this story
Reviewer: Xaria Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2016 03:06 pm
I like the story, and I'm sure I am not the 1st to say this.... Plz proofread or get a beta reader. I am not saying this as a put down, I love the plot... but the gazillion typos take away from the story.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2015 07:43 am
This story is amazing! I devoured all 15 chapters can't wait to read more! :)
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2015 02:54 am
Very interesting story, with a mother like she has she does not need any enemies. I like the chemistry between the Jack and James. The way she set Roxy in her place was classic. Just a thought, Mo and Ace hooking up. That Armani, SMH, why does he need to cause problems. I hope Lisa doesn't open her big mouth to him about Jackie. Well I do hope you complete this story.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2014 12:07 am
Great update, thanks for posting
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: March 01 2014 07:09 am
I just luv this I hate how he treats her but I hope he is learning to luv keep up the great writing
Reviewer: Charming2i Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 01 2014 06:56 am
I love this story and like that some outside conflict has been thrown into the mix. Armani is just plain crazy. Can't wait for him to see Jacqueline with James that will really given him something to be envious of since Lisa propably can't even come so to Jacqueline.
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 28 2014 05:24 pm
I LOVE THIS CONCEPT!!! I LOVE this story!! I cannot wait for the next update. James is too sexy. And I love Jack!!!
Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2014 03:06 pm
Good job. I love your new system of up dating!!
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2014 08:41 am
When will u update again
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2014 08:10 am