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Title: Chapter Five

Bipolar indeed.

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 04:36 pm
Title: Chapter Five

This was quite an interesting chapter.  I have to admit I like this story-there's just something about it...particularly the two main characters.   So passionate.  For Alec, I really hope he can control his "passionate" feelings.  Just saying.  His mantra, "I'm going to hurt you" doesn't sit right with me.   Regarding the date, I would have played my hand differently (I wouldn't have told him but let him find out that I would not be too available because I'm doing my own thing) but I see it worked in her favor by blurting it out in anger.  She got what he wanted.  

Poor Chloe...jealous because a  guy pays her friend more attention even after she gave up the goods.  But if given the chance again she would give it up in a hearbeat. And why is Gabriel smiling in her face like that? Hmm...things are going to get more interesting for all in this story I see...

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 02:16 pm
Title: Chapter Five

Lexi and Alec are not your typical couple. I wonder how her family will react to him.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 01:46 pm
Title: Chapter Four

He didn;y were condom? Is he trying to get her preggers?

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 01:38 pm
Title: Chapter Five

I liked the update but I hope she doesn't give serious credence to what John says. First of all, he's a stalker and anything can happen. And regardless of whether she goes or not he'll keep stalking. and second, Alec will kill him or at least make him pay for hitting on her. Alec's anger and manhandling concerns me. Poor Chloe I hope that she doesn't get her feelings hurt. And if Jayden tries to push up on Kami, she needs to reject him speedily. 

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Date: January 06 2013 01:37 pm
Title: The Cast

I love this story so much. I just wish there were more adds. I've redress it three times today!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 09:23 am
Title: Chapter Four

Damn, I can't :-)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 02:34 pm
Title: Chapter Four

totally, awesome chapter.  Keep up the good work and update soon.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2012 05:20 am
Title: Chapter Four

Ok alec can punish me  any time day on night monday thu sunday 365 days a  year. That was hot hot hot  set my computer on fire. I liking this story alot and look foward to the next update. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2012 01:05 am
Title: Chapter Four

How could a man claim a woman's body but claim not to have any feelings for her whatsoever? Love isn't easy but it's worth the effort to try. 

 

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 11:27 pm
Title: Chapter Four

This was a good chapter.
Lexi may need to have more of a backbone though, either you are together and she is yours or she is not. Getting mad over what someone who is not even your girlfriend, is wearing is crazy. Alec needs to be honest with himself and Lexi or she should leave him and then maybe just maybe he would get a clue.

Update Soon!!

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 08:57 pm
Title: Chapter Four

Wow that was great!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 06:35 pm
Title: Chapter Three

Ok that was little hot I wanted Alec to lift me up and take me right then and there. Boy he has some mood swings on him lol maybe its his time of the month lol. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 03:36 pm
Title: Chapter Two

Now all sudden he wants to be up his best friend for making comments about his girlfriend oops i mean his friend lol. Alec your friend is right she is changing you and you don't even know it. I wonder why he doesn't belive  in love thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 03:15 pm
Title: Chapter One

Alec come on you know you are in love with Lex. She sleeps over at your place cooks for you put smile on your face and making you into better alec smh that guy for you lol. thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 02:29 pm
Title: The Cast

Nice pic of the cast.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 02:15 pm
Title: Chapter Four

I guess Alec is claiming his woman and I love it.  Although a part of as a problem with a white man talking to a black woman like that.  But damn that was sexy!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 06:04 am
Title: Chapter Three

Okay...what's is Alec playing at...seriously, he's telling himself and Lex that he can't be the man that Lexi wants...but here he is now going all "caveman" on her...for real...give me a break...he either needs to sh*t or get off the pot...why is he telling her what she should or shouldn't be wearing but having no intention of putting "claims" on her...his jealously was "cute" for want of better word last chapter...but now...he's just being a boor...be a man and claim your woman or move on...glad Lexi seems to finally be growing a backbone...she deserves better...she's worth it...let him know girl...let him know...

Can't wait for the next update

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2012 03:56 am
Title: Chapter Three

So...I'm seriously in love with your story! I think you're very talented, I love your writing style, I like the characters...I mean..wow! I just hope you're gonna keep the quick updates coming 'cause I know this good stuff doesn't just write itself...oh, also I hope you can cut out some space in the story for Kami and Jayden. Anyways great job!!!

 Reviewer: Reet92 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2012 11:34 pm
Title: Chapter Three

Thanks for an awesome update . I really like this story . Can't wait to read more .

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2012 10:11 pm
Title: Chapter Three

I'm glad that their relationship is confusing. It makes it seem more real, because everything isn't perfect. Love all of the characters. Update soon? 

 Reviewer: xDangerousLovex Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2012 10:07 pm
Title: Chapter Three

I am so loving this story. Please update soon :)

 Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2012 07:54 pm
Title: Chapter Three

I have to say, i'm hooked! I love this story. Alec and Lexi are interesting.

 Reviewer: Singinangel12 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2012 02:18 pm
Title: Chapter Three

Alec, Boy, she is not yo property. Somebody needs to take him down a notch. Lexi, just because he's possessive doesn't mean he cares. Junior needs to grow the hell up.

Looking forward to what Alec has planned.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 19 2012 10:14 am
Title: Chapter Three

great chapter.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2012 09:35 am


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