Reviews For PHOBIA
Title: The Second Break-Up....and Make-Up

Shit! Doesn't this girl have even a penny-size of dignity? It totally baffled me how shameless she is... I mean great writing but the supposed heroine is so disgustingly weak, I find myself irritated every time she'll just fall into the same all routine. Damn she needs a new hobby, seriously. Let's just hope that no one in real life is like that.

Reviewer: Puccapurple Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2016 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 17: Backstreets

Tyler should move on with his life without Alex. I know that he wasn't innocent in all that what had happened, but Alex really is not the woman for him. He deserves better, someone who he can truly trust and who will not let her family and friends interfere in their relationship or disrespect him.

 

As for Lucas, I really hope that now that he had finally had sex with Alex, he will get over his stupid obsession he has for her. He shouldn't have even continue being close friends with her if his feelings for her were more than one of a friendship. He knew damn well that she was taken, and yet he didn't care. Both him and Alex are selfish. He wanted to ruin her relationship with Tyler, and Alex used him to make Tyler jealous, and played dumb, because she must have known that Lucas liked her more than friends. She couldn't have been that clueless. I really think that Lucas too should move on with someone else. Start fresh and fall in love with a woman who is single. Instead of going after other man's woman.

 

As for Alex, she has some insecurities that she needs to work on. And also learn that when it comes to the man she chooses to have a relationship with, she needs to tell her family and friends to back the fuck off and respect her man and choices.I truly think that both Tyler and Lucas would be better of without her. Especially Tyler. I mean look at how she slept with Lucas, and is still undecided. I just don't get her. I really don't.

Reviewer: anony Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 22 2014 04:25 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Against the Odds

Welcome back!  Well, although I love a HEA, I really don't think Alex or Ty is good for one another. 

Alex and her family totally disrespected Ty and then she topped it off by having sex with Lucas AND she is still undecided! 

Tyler has issues and one was him placing Alex on a pedestal where she really didn't belong--he seems obsessed with her, but he really didn't want to lose out to Lucas. 

Now Lucas on the other hand, deserves Alex.  Alex may think it is love, but imo, Lucas finally got him some and his vision cleared.  I really would like for Lucas to find someone that will love him and truly be there for him.  I hope he relalize it's ok to love someone deeply and to move on and remember what his dad said, 'everything will be ok'.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2014 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 17: Backstreets

Im still team Lucas and Alex forget tyler lol

Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2014 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 17: Backstreets

I am glad that he told his human incubayor how he felt. That woman was stupid but they were better off without her. I thouhht that you had forgotten about this story so thanks for updating.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2014 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 17: Backstreets

It's good to see Tyler had someone to lean on.  Hopefully he'll get better and find someone to love and trust so he can have  the happy ending he wanted with Alexandra.

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 22 2014 01:30 am

Title: Chapter 17: Backstreets

I"m so glad that Tyler choose for him and is trying to move on. I hope he doesn't go back to Alex. He deserves some happiness, and honestly, its not with her. He clearly had some issues that he needed to work on to, but Alex wasn't making it any better for him either. Her friendship with Lucas was selfish and very disrespectful. If you ask me, Lucas too should move on with his life and end up with someone else. But to be completely honest, I never really liked Lucas. He claimed to be friends and in love with Alex, but he did not care enough for her to respect that she has a relationship with another man already. A real friend will always respect you when you already are in a relationship no matter how in love they are with you. As for Alex, I really don't care what happens to her in the end. 

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 17: Backstreets

To be honest, I just don't feel Alex being with Lucas or Tyler. It may sound mean, but they are both better of without her. Especially Tyler. I'm not saying that what he had done was right, but Alex was not a good girlfriend to him. She had allowed her family and friends to treat him poorly. She should have put her foot down and tell them to back off and respect her relationship and her man. The way she decided to feed on the very insecurities that Tyler had told her repeatedly by making him jealous with Lucas was childish and also cruel. Also she couldn't have been that oblivious to Lucas's love. She was in denial.


 


Also maybe I'm the only one who feels this, but Lucas was not a good friend. A good friend will respect that you are in a relationship with someone else, no matter how much they like you.


They would have continued being your friend, but also keep a distance. I know that Lucas doesn't own Tyler anything, but I'm sure that if it as the other way around, he wouldn't have approve for her girlfriend to have the kind of friendship Alex had with him. 


 


To me Alex comes off as a very selfish and uncaring woman. In a way she used both of them and was only thinking about herself. She deserves to be alone. Not because she had hurt or use both men, but more because no matter who she chooses, the "what if I chose to be with Lucas/Tyler" will always be in the back of her mind. When you are between two guys, and you are confused as to who you love more, or who you should be with, its very difficult, and will always hunt you. Because you will feel sorry and guilty for the one you did not choose. And you will always wonder whether you made the good choice or not. Been there done that.

Reviewer: MsStars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 11:46 pm

Title: Chapter 17: Backstreets

Nice surprise, thanks for the new chapter and the update the lives of those three.

I am glad that Tyler has been slowly mving on. I so don't want him to go back with Alex. This ship has sailed, for good. going back would be such a step back IMHO. Also, knowing how her family and "firends" will never accept him, unless they all have a collective "come to Jesus and stop being an asshole" moment, that will always put strains in their relationship. So I really hope he is able to put this part of his love, with all the good and the bad, behind him. I get this is a slow process, but I whish for him to start fresh and going back with Alex fells so "wash rince and repeat"...

Also glad he was able to talk to is mother. Is he seeking some professional help? I think he needs it 'cause this is going to be a long way for him to walk in order to confront his issues : they won't be resolved just like that, it is another step, after the one he took by leaving Alex. He needs his family support, but also the support of someone, outside of family and friends, who could give him a fresh perspective on his live, and won't be emotionally bound to him one way or another.

And then, I also hope he is able to find love again and build an healthy loving and trusting relationship.



Author's Response:

I am so happy for Tyler too. He needs this, and although the path ahead is tough, I am confident he will get to move on at some point, as long as nothing drastic happens on the road.

I don't really want him to go back to Alex, but am still conflicted about this story. I'm exploring all possibilities before closing doors on the future. He might be better off without her and she might be better off without him. 

I think now this is the time for him to seek professional help and actually be serious about it. He's spoken to his mother, which was a huge step, but now that he has done it he should be finally on his way to dealling with his issues. 

You're like a mind-reader. He will get outside support. Just you wait! And this person is going to be awesome. He will develop friendships with someone who had not witnessed all the stuff that had been going on, and that person will be able to look at his past and his issues more objectively. 

I kind of want him to find love again. However, it is not possible until he learns to love himself so much that he is able to trust and love someone completely and put his fears aside. Until that happens, I don't see love in his cards.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 08:03 pm

Title: Chapter 16

damn, i dont know how i missed this update but wow and finally!! you know my heart beats harder for Lucas then Tyler but i think Lucas is right by stepping back and letting Alex decide what she wants to do - look forward to the update! thanks!!



Author's Response:

Alex had it coming. Lol. Thank you for your review! :D

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2013 04:49 pm

Title: Chapter 2: Complicated

I don't like her.. she knows he cares about her and yet she is using him, that's not nice...:(

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2013 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 16

I don't know how you did it but you completely vindicated Alex for me in less then ten sentences. You Go Glen CoCo!!! I glad the guys are protecting themselves and Alex needs to tell her parents off! Job well done



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. Of course it was the right thing to do. There comes a time in some people's lives when they need to be selfish enough to love themselves more than others. 

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2013 07:35 am

Title: Chapter 16

The human heart and mind are capable of loving many people but the heart can only be in love with one person at time because being in love is so big and consuming.  Alex is pissing me off, aLucas save yourself Alex is not deserving of your love she used you knowing how you felt about her.  Team Lucas all the way.  Really Alex neither your family nor your friends liked Tyler that shkuld have told you something right there.  This here was the sugady!



Author's Response:

Alex is pissing me off as well. Actually, she's been pissing me off for a long time. But soon enough, I hope I'll be able to see her in a better light. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2013 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 16

wonderful



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 06 2013 02:14 am

Title: Chapter 1: Against the Odds

It is always so sad when two people get in the way of love.   Tyler and his trust issue had him getting in his own way and destroying his happiness.  Alex should have known that she was killing their relationship by insisting on continuing her friendship with  Lucas when she knew it bothered Tyler.  She had to know that Lucas was in love with her before his drunken confession.  I don't like these threeway love affairs when all the people involved are decent. It makes it hard to be happy for the two people that end up together because you wonder if the one left behind is okay.  Looking forward to your next update

Reviewer: VeMo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

PAUSE HOW THE HELL IS HE A PSYCHOLOGIST AND HE HAS THAT MANY ISSUES! LOL

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

I really try to avoid stories like this, love triangles are the worst they always remind me of One Tree Hill. No matter what I always felt bad for Brooke and in this situation Tyler is Brooke, Alex is Lucas and Lucas is Peyton. I don't agree with Alex's family and friends disregarding Tyler, what he did in the beginning wasn't that bad he never said he didn't love her he said the engagement was premature. I feel like throughout this story Tyler has been fighting blood sweat and finally tears and I'm glad he's choosing himself. Now him having her followed was wrong but all the times Alex lashes out at him about him hurting her it has underlining issues with his mother. Stuff like this makes me sad. I have to go to work tomorrow at 530 and I'm still reading this. lol. You are a gifted storyteller I just wish someone else had Tyler's back that it wasn't so one sided. I mean I like Andre but the 8 year old isn't cutting it for me anymore. The Christmas party was the worst I have been in the position of having a boyfriend care about someone else' well-being than mine so my heart ached for Tyler. Oh and that flashback when Lucas returned her cell phone and they practically flirted was too much for me. Mark my words because this thing with Lucas is gonna take it's turn for the worst mainly because that's how it usually happens in fiction stories. lol This chapter really hurt the worst mainly this line “After we broke up the first time, when I met Lucas I wished I didn’t love you. I knew I could have easily fallen in love with him if I hadn’t been in love with you.” she admitted. Now I have to call bullshit every time Tyler hurt her (BTW: even though he never cheated, verbally abused or hit her just gave her great sex) I am officially TEAM TYLER even if he doesn't end up with her he needs to get his mommy issues solved and get closer to his family cause it sucks that everyone love Alex but treats him second class. I love you Tyler! Now, because I have to see how it ends and your writing skills are so awesome I am going to have to track this story I hate love triangles...you suck lol. 



Author's Response:

Took me 3000 years to answer your review. I just want to say thank you for the kind words and for your opinion. I hate love triangles too, and that is why I wanted to write about one, if that makes any sense at all. 

I'll be more quick at answering reviews and posting, I promise.

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 05:11 am

Title: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

Oh my goshh I am sobbing! I love it

Reviewer: chocachocacandyland Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

Very nice job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

Tyler and Alex are both equally to blame for the break down of their relationship. I don't get the people getting on her case because this guy was emotionally abusive always accusing her of cheating, and making her feel bad all the time. And Alex should have left Lucas alone knowing that it agitated Tyler although he probably would have found someone else to gripe about. I think Alex needs to be by herself a while and then give Lucas a chance. If it works out great, if it doesn't at least she doesn't have to wonder what if anymore. As for Tyler he needs to deal with his issues before he even tries to get into another relationship, let alone getting back with Alex. Looking forward to see where you take this story.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

It is my greatest wish that Lexi will end up by herself as she is still whinning, "I don't know if I love Lucas".  She is such a punk and she makes my teeth itch.   I hope that Tyler does get himself together and I want to find true love.  Lucas deserves to have the love of woman who is unselfish.  Excellent!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 01:07 am

Title: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

this broke my heart.  it was painful to read because i've been there.  they have a lot to sort out, but i hope they find happiness; whether it's together or apart.

great chapter...you evoked a lot of emotion in me with this one!  

Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 12:47 am

Title: Chapter 14: Sideways

so so soo glad that you're back - thank you for the update, adi milano!! hope to see more from you - soooon! ;)



Author's Response:

You'll hear from me soon. Do not worry. :D

I'm happy that you are glad that I am back. I should thank you for finding the time for reviewing and being so enthusiastic about this story. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2013 05:43 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Sideways

I just discovered that story, I didn't realize it was about a triangle (which I really hate), before getting sucked into it! So great job, writer ;)! I liked the fact that there was the 3 different points of view. It helped understanding those characters's motivation.

I don't dislike Tyler and don't quite understand why people hated him so much. I thought that he was quite honest about what he felt for Alex from the beginning, aknowledging his issues. Yeah, he made mistakes by breaking with her twice just because he was insecure, and he was being a bit of a coward for not confronting seriously his issues. But I didn't like how Alex's family and friends constantly dissed him, pushing her to be with Lucas and all. It was bad, rude, disrespectful. I mean, it is not like Tyler cheated on her repeteadly or abused her. He sounded like a somehow decent guy, despite his commitment issues (which where quite serious, 1st his mother then his girlfirend). And it looks like they never really did give him a chance, to get to know him, apart for little Andre, who acted with more maturity than all the adults. The only thing that was really, really stupid was that spying on his girlfriend shit. For now, I really hope he is able to seek some professional help, with his rabbi AND a therapist, and not just in order to make up with Alex, but for his own good. Good that he is the one who decided to leave Alex. I hope he stick to it and there won't be any going back together, at least not before he has began to confront his demons.

About Alex, I was really upset reading the first chapter, when she decided to feed on the very insecurities that Tyler had told her repeatedly by 1) going to stay with Lucas 5 minutes after leaving Tyler, and getting back at Tyler by letting herself be photographed with Lucas. That was a very low move on her part. And then acting all innocent like she didn't understand why he was being jealous and accusing her of cheating on him. Really, girl? Also, the fact that she was so oblivious to Lucas' love is juts too hard to believe. For years everybody had been telling her that Lucas was in love with her and she just kept behaving as if it was nonsense. She was in denial. And it was bad 'cause she kept acting all besties with Lucas, telling him she "loved him", which was NOT cool at all. She totally led him on. And her so-called other friends should have told her to stop bullshitting herself and be honest with herself and with Tyler and Lucas. I get that she didn't want to lose his friendship, and I am with her for not agreeing to stop seeing him just 'cause Tyler told her so, but at some point, she should have confronted Lucas: asking him point blank if he was in love with her. But she didn't and that was wrong. So in a sense, Tyler was right: she was emotionally "cheating" on him with Lucas. And I also think that she kept going back with Tyler because it was the easy way: she knew that despite his issues, he did love her, so it was better to go back than to confront Lucas. That is why I hate triangle story: the girl (as it is often the girl who has  2 competing love interest) always comes out of it being selfish and annoying. I am glad that she aknowledged it in the last chapter. I hope she let Tyler go for good. She could hep him, as a friend, to get better, but she has to stop playing with him, especially now that Lucas had told her how he felt. She can't be like "oh my god I don't know what to do, I love them both". Please, not that! That won't be fair, to any of them. After all, seeing how those two guys hate each other, it is not like they would be willing to be in a ménage à trois. So now that she aknowledged her feelings, she should try and have a relationship with Lucas, and stop the unnecessary drama.



Author's Response:

I want to start by saying that I had absolutely loved your review. I was thinking about many of the points that you have raised.

Tyler is not so bad. He has never got over the trauma of being abandoned by his mother. But he will deal with his issues. I can't allow him not to. It just wouldn't be right.

When I was finishing off chapter 14 I was thinking why Alex kept going back to him all the time. After all, why would you put yourself through such heartache and insecurity and at the same time deny your obvious feelings for Lucas. She did it only because Tyler was what she knew, what she was used to. She didn't want to take a chance on Lucas because she thought Tyler was the one and didn't want to see that unless she and Tyler worked proactively to solve their issues together, and him to solve his own as well, everything was only going to deteriotate. I wished she had realised this sooner. I don't know if things between them would have been different if they had acted differently. 

I don't like triangle stories either, however, I ended up writing one and before I realised what was going on it was too late. 

I don't know whether she needs to have a relationship with Lucas as of yet. I don't really see her ready for that, and I don't even know if Lucas is ready to be with her.

Thank you very much for reviewing. I'll post the next chapter in a few minutes. I'd love to know what you think about it.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 20 2013 04:19 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Sideways

Yay, you're back!!!

She finally admitted her feelings for Lucas but I still dislike Alex tremendously. You can't be in love with two people at the same time, you love them many but to be in love is bigger.  Being in love is finding the other half of your love, Tyler was not and is not her soul's compliment.  Alex is still making my teeth itch!!!  Love Lucas!!



Author's Response:

I'm not part of the Alex fan club either to be honest with you. But such is life, I guess. 

Thank you for reviewing. :D 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2013 06:49 am



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