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Title: Chapter 6

im very interested in your story mainly because nothing has come together yet. I like the tone and ambiguity really I do, but if I had to say, I'd like to ask for longer segments. I've seen this before. It's like putting together a puzzle right? Little pieces here and there until the author starts linking them.

Its an admirable style, but it can be a tad frustrating when the segments don't give enough information. The sroty is intriguing and I like the pairing, they fit well. You get he feeling of a really powerful duo. I don't watch either show, never have, I'm sure your attemp is infinitely better. I cannot shake the feeling that because I haven't I'm missing something important.

Please do continue, I'm eager to understand what this all means.

 Reviewer: Tara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 01 2015 01:00 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Nice!!! more please...

 Reviewer: Lindy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2013 09:06 am
Title: Chapter 5

I love this story, please update soon, thank you for sharing.

 Reviewer: Lindy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2013 08:14 am
Title: Chapter 2

I like it. I don't watch the show so this is new to me. I like Bonnie she is feisty.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 05:59 am
Title: Chapter 4

Just wanted to let you know that I really like your story. I like the Derek Hale character on Teen Wolf and I like the Bonnie character outside of regular TVD world. 

 

Don't be discouraged about the lack of the reviews.  Keep writing your story.  You have some powerful imagery going on and good descriptive approach.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this review; to be honest I was getting quite disheartened by the lack of reviews, especially because it's already hard writing crossover ships. Thank you for taking the time to write me a few words ^_^

 Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2013 06:33 am
Title: Chapter 3

Still here and enjoying.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review! I've been a bit saddened by the dearth of reviews so far but hopefully it'll get better as the story progresses. Glad you're enjoying :)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 27 2013 04:08 am
Title: Chapter 2

Having never watched any of the shows, I'm just enjoying this for the good story that it is.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 03:36 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Great update . Oh, dear and now Klaus is in the mix. Poor Bonnie. I can't wait to see what happens next . More please . :)

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 06:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

Very, very nice!  I love the pairing of Bonnie with Derek.  They make a good couple.  Did Derek take her pendant necklace?  Why?

Can't wait for more!!!

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 29 2013 01:30 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start. Can't wait to read more .

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2013 04:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story and the intertwining of the story streams, so to speak.  I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. 

 Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2013 04:28 pm


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