Good. Luc needs to cut Lana off. She is using him; well they are using each other with there little agreement but Lana is doing the dude role. Good enough to *uck but anything else, forget about it. I KNOW they made an agreement but it's not fair for Luc to be nearly, if not head over heels for Lana and she just treats him as a toy. Now, I can understand Lana wanting a significant other who can support themselve, but Luc can support himself just not nearly as good as Lana can support herself. So, I do understand her need not to want to be stuck taking care of some dude.
But really, Luc is not just some dude. She has been sleeping with him for how long? In all that time has he given her the impression that he is some good for nothing loser that wants her for her money and wants to be taken care of? Some people take a little longer to accomplish themselves. Does he make any demands on her? You would think even the most unobservant person would know a few characteristics about the person they are sleeping with on a regular bases. I'm not against Lana I just wish she would stop thinking about herself so much and realize it is not all about her. Great update!!!!!
Reviewer: oHH Signed
[Report This]Date: March 22 2013 04:09 am
I wish Lana would say something herself instead of waiting for Lucas to. Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 20 2013 05:10 am
nice update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2013 04:44 am
Well I would feel worse for Lucas if the no attach clause, according to Lana, wasn't his idea. Now he wants to change it up because he caught some feelings. Meh! Guess we'll see how it goes.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2013 02:26 am
I feel bad for Lucas. He needs to tell her what he wants. She may surprise him and want the same thing. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2013 01:00 am
Good start to the story. I can't wait to read her POV. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2013 12:55 am
I really like this "couple " . Can't wait for the next chapter .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 20 2013 12:40 am
Wow, Lana is really selfish and heartless. Why did she agree to this realization when she knew that Lucas had feelings for her in the beginning? Can you tell that I really don't like Lana? I am looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2013 12:35 am
He thinks he doesn't know her, but it seems to me, through sex, that he knows a lot about her. Some pretty major intangibles, I think. And he needs to tell her what's on his mind.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 02:31 am
Excellent start! It's refreshing to see the male character as the one who's wondering about the state of the relationship and whether or not the other person cares just as much as he does.
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 01:12 am
I wish that you would just post all of them b/c I'm really into this story, and I can't wait to see if Lana feels the same way. Really like your writing. It will be pure torture to wait for you to post the next chapter.
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2013 11:48 pm
Ooh.this is an interesting beginning. Please update soon. Lucas may be in for a world of hurt.
Reviewer: CestianiDauphin1 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 12 2013 11:45 pm
Ooooh great starter! I think this story will hit close to home for A LOT of people. The only advice I'd give Lucas is to run loool. If he's not strong enough to call off their arrangement face to face, he can always leave a voicemail or something.
You can't force someone to be in a relationship with you, especially if you've started as fwb's.
Can't wait for the remaning chapters.
Reviewer: paayush Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2013 11:39 pm
I love this, can't wait to see how their relationship plays out.
Reviewer: BreBre Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2013 09:01 pm
Nice start! I like that these types of stories are usually from the female's POV. Nice twist.
Interested to see where you take this.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 12 2013 08:59 pm
You are talented. I can't wait to read more of this story. Lucas, I get him, I've seen what these type of arrangements can do to a man. Hmm! I'm intrigued by Lana and who hurt her.
Great work...don't keep us starving!
P.S. Can we get an extra-helping next week
Reviewer: siennagray Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2013 08:46 pm
Great start. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 12 2013 08:15 pm
Lucas it's time to kick Lana to the curb. Don't let her use you for your love pole! Tell her, Has ta LA vista baby!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2013 07:49 pm
well this is interestng. i've been in his postion before lol it sucks.
Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2013 07:37 pm