amazing erotic story. please update it!!!!!!Reviewer: rozi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2015 03:33 pm
Yeah I can imagine. Trust me, your pretty good in my book even with that. I'm a reader, not a writer cause I would definately suck at it. I get a bunch of ideas in my head but can never get enough content to make a full blown story. You guys, writers, are pretty awesome to me so no worries.Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2013 05:15 am
I am loving this story so far. I love teacher-student stories since they are so sexy and taboo but this is even better since it is a female professor. I'm looking forward to the drama that will sure be coming up after the engagement announcement.
Now, a bit of constructive criticism...it seems like you forget your previous chapters or your ideas are popping up like crazy since there are some inconsistencies. On the first chapter Amiya remembered an encounter with Pierce at the store and she told him she danced and on this chapter she either forgot about it or you did since she was suprised he knew she danced haha. Another one was, on that same scene he told her he lived outside of campus and on this chapter he said he was staying in the cottage since the univesity didn't offer housing during break. Just some little things, sorry I'm a bit OCD which would make me a "good" editor lol. Other than that this is awesome and I like your writing style. Looking forward to that dinner!!! Maybe there'll be some dancing so Amiya can ger her turn to drive him crazy and make him stupid like he does to her all the time lol.
Hi thank you so much for your feedback! I think it's more to your former point - I go so long between writing and updating that I forget what I wrote even if I go back and re-read. So thanks for pointing that out. I will do my best to be more consistent. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! See you in Chapter 6.Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2013 04:36 pm
His dad is Shadyyy. He doesn't care about his son but more about bragging rights and business. Also even Jeremiah, why would you agree to this if you love your daughter so much, did she come to you about doing this and I'm sorry Sarah, c'mon where is the pride at. If a man don't want you and it is only a business transaction, why. You deserve love just as much as anyone. I hope Pierce is prepared for the utter destruction of your private life by your father. Why don't I see a happy ending in this. When you read about the characters, their ages fly out the window for me. I honestly forget sometime that he is as young as he is since he does not hesistate to ask for what he wants for the most part and the confidence. Hey, Prince Maxillmillian o Liechenstein married an older black woman. Why can't Pierce. Thanks for coming back with a good chapter.
Haha you make some excellent points. So good that I think in the next chapter I will include some insight regarding Jeremiah's choice to marry off his beloved daughter in such a manner. Thanks for reading!Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2013 02:35 am
Girl, you have got a gem! Keep it up.Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 26 2013 12:01 am
So hot!! The chemistry between these two is off the charts! I'm so glad I found this story. I know there will be some drama because of the fiancee and his family, plus her job!!? Oh you have so many ways to take thus story. I live it. Update again soon!!Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2013 06:43 am
I really love the way you write! It is so descriptive. The rational, professional side of me wants to slap some sense into Amiya. However, the other side . . . well, let's just say I'm enjoying this story immensely!!!Reviewer: M_Denise Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 25 2013 01:55 am
Welcome back and looking forward to more.
I think A. being 35 to his 21-22 is too much. She's smart and maybe she finished school early and kinda lied about her age to get the professor position-maybe she is really 26-29.
Sarah is lying and feeling him.
Carson is going to slip it slip about Sarah to A. in a casual conversation.
He knows he wants more from her than sex and plan to get her--this I gotta see. Does he think she will continue even after she finds out about the planned fake marriage?Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2013 01:51 am
love it happy u are back more soon 5*****Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2013 10:18 pm
I love the chemistry between Pierce and Amiya. I must commend Pierce for his restraint and Amiya, I felt your pain girl when he stopped. I do think that Pierce is starting to want more than just to have a casual fling with Amiya, who for now seems to be content with getting her pipes cleaned thoroughly and frequently with Pierce though I'm sure real feelings will start to trickle in. I'm worried about Charles finding out about them and using that as leverage over Amiya on top of threatening with her losing her job after haughtily rubbing Pierce's betrothal in her face. Will Pierce tell Amiya about his arranged marriage before she finds out the hard way? Will Pierce finally stand up to his dad and tell him to go shove it because its his life and he found someone he wants to be with? Looking forward to more. Thanks for updating!Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2013 08:33 pm