please update this story, i love it!!!!
Reviewer: coocoojjksx345 Signed [Report This]Date: September 28 2013 10:09 pm
I love this. I cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: Carriekiara Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2013 07:45 pm
Oh Sarah is right. I cannot wait for the Aniya and Pierce to hook up again. This is turning out to be one of my favorites!
Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed [Report This]Date: July 02 2013 08:40 pm
Oh this is awesome. I live the way you write. This fic is sexy, smart and interesting. Keep going please!
Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed [Report This]Date: July 02 2013 08:17 pm
Love the cast!
Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed [Report This]Date: July 02 2013 07:59 pm
This story is so good. But it's scary waiting for the shoe to drop.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2013 03:10 pm
Looks like Sarah got caught up even though she claimed she was just as miserable as he was and didn't love him...I had a feeling that wasn't true. That she was lying. Honestly, though is there a future between Pierce and Amiya? How old is he again? 21? 22? She's 35 already so yeah...I'm wondering where this is all going to go...right now though I see this as just a sex thing. He seems to have some kind of feelings for Amiya but I'm not convinced that this is something lasting. Not yet anyway.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2013 08:56 am
I smell trouble!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 03:12 pm
OMG! They both are way in over their heads. What will Daddy dearest do to cause trouble?
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 02:00 pm
Have just discovered this story and think it is really good. The sex scenes between Pierce and Amiya are so hot. Can't wait to see how their relationship progresses.
Please update again soon.
Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 10:16 am
OMG!! KEEP WRITING
Reviewer: ESTHER Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 09:45 am
Pierce is sooo sneaky programming his number in Amiya's phone like that! I'm glad Amiya gave into her inhibitions and texted Pierce back.
Thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 06:55 am
Great update!! This will not end good. Amiya should break off with Pierce, but it looks as though she will not. Things like this NEVER end good. Pierce is a liar. I know his engagement is not his doing, but he's right, he is completely selfish. Amiya has so much to lose, but if she takes that step, if she loses her job and whatever else happens will be her fault and all for a brief affair that will amount to nothing, because trust me Pierce will NEVER marry Amiya. He may not want to marry Sarah, but he will. This is the reality of it all, if this were a real life story. Now since it isn't anything is possible, but the odds are still not Amiya's favor. One, Pierce's dad knows. Two, Amiya does not even know Pierce is engaged. How is that going to go down? Wow, I cannot wait to read that. This is all very casual and things like this happen all the time, but I just feel that Amiya might get too attached to Pierce and end up hurt the most.
I do feel for Sarah, but regardless, Sarah will get Pierce no matter what. Sarah wants Pierce to at least like her back, but if he doesn't, I don't think she really cares, she just wants him. As for him cheating, I don't think she cares about that either because she knows at the end of the day, he WILL be her husband so she will settle and look at the big picture. So many women live like this and it is unfair, but when money and power is involved one has to suck it up and go with the flow regardless of their feelings whether they are strong or severely lacking. More please!!!
Author's Response:
Love everything about this detailed commentary. You're right. It does seem like a lose-lose for Amiya. But I dunno, maybe Amiya's got a thing or two up her sleeve? And give Pierce more credit! LOL. JK.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 05:30 am
wow love this story so happy you are back more soon very soon 5*****
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 03:27 am
This story is just WOW. It is better than the stuff I pay good money for. The narrative is amazing. The dialogue is intelligent and believable. And the sex scene was steamy without being crass. You, my dear, are a talented writer. I can't wait to read more from you. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: MiMi Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 03:05 am
The crazy thing is I can't feel bad for Sarah. Mainly because I was once the woman on the other side, the "other" woman. It's sucks dealing with a guy who is engaged for business and family dealings.
Not to mention, girls like Sarah don't play the victim for long..
and I dealt with crazy shit for almost 3 years.
Author's Response:
"girls like Sarah don't play the victim for long..."
ain't that the truth, sista.
Reviewer: Soledad Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 02:40 am
Glad Amiya is going to go for it! Dont trust Sarah with her I am unhappy too! Pierce and Amiya are hot together look forward to more.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 12:46 am
Update as SOON as possilbe pleaseeee!!!
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2013 12:03 am
Aww poor sarah! Update soon =]
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2013 11:26 pm
Oh Sarah is right. I do like Pierce and Amiya together. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 25 2013 10:57 pm
Seems like Sarah doth protest too much. No matter what she may say, she wants this thing with Pierce, and she wants it to last. It seemed like she might have been just about to get what she wants, but now he's thrown a wrench in the plans.
She might not blab to Alex, but I don't think she'll keep quiet to her family, which in turn is going to leak to Charles. And he is holding trump cards he doesn't even know of yet.
Things are going to get a lot messy, aren't they?
Author's Response:
soo messy...:)
Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2013 10:50 pm
Wow pierce has some skills to make woman past out after sex lol. I think it more going on btween him and Amiya I think their falling in love and just to afarid to say it. I hope everything work out for the couple. But let not forget dad listen to voicemail left on his phone. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2013 10:43 pm
You need to update this.
Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]Date: June 22 2013 03:54 pm
Can't wait for part three. I'll admit, I read this expecting not to like this. Not into May-December romance but this is hot. And steamy. And like Pierce there is more than expected.
Reviewer: Kay Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 21 2013 03:48 am
Salivating for more.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 06:02 pm