This was soooo HHHHOOOOOTTTTTT !!!!!!!! Whew I need something cold to cool me down. This is the start to what am sure will be an incredible story. Update soon ppplllllzzzzzz!!!
Reviewer: klarybelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 01:31 am
These two are just so F***in HOTT!!! Pierce and Amiya there are no words but...WOW!!! Pierce's father is a total douche to force his son into marrying some chick that Pierce doesn't even seem to like. And I have a funny feeling that he will use Amiya to do it. If I were Pierce I would do something drastic that would keep my father of my back, I don't know how he can force his son into something he was forced into without a care in the world. That sex in the library was just...WOW!!! Looking forward to seeing what Pierce and Amiya do next.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed
[Report This]Date: May 14 2013 12:04 am
Love. Love. Love
Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 04:07 pm
Hmmm...interesting? Amiya and Pierce seem to be falling for each other...but what about Sarah. How strong is Pierce? Will he cave to his father? Will Amiya send him away...interesting? More please.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 08:56 am
Theyre in freaking trouble thats what!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 07:54 am
More More More ! Damn Hot chapter.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 05:21 am
HOT! I hope these two actually make it to a bed one day lol!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 05:10 am
wow love it more ch4,5,6,7 and more soon
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 05:02 am
So glad you added another chapter! This one was hotter then the last chapter! I love Amiya and Pierce! Do hope you contiue, I am hooked already!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 04:26 am
I don't know but they going to need alot water food if they keep this up lol. So the dad heard them not good his father going to force him to marry the girl and leave Amiya. I think they make great couple. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 03:38 am
I loved it!!!!! But you can't end a story like that. you have to keep going because I sure as hell want know who got THAT CALL!!!! Just minor grammar errors and missing words need to be corrected but the story line is very interesting. Good Job overall!
Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2013 02:09 am
Very nice pictures...I was so blown away by chapter 1 that I never saw chapter 2. LOL!
Girl,....I cannot wait for more.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2013 11:12 pm
First story??? Sure doesn't seem like it. LOL. I AM HOOKED!!!
I LOVE this introduction. IT IS SOOOO HAWT!!!!!! And I simply cannot wait to see your next Update.
Hopefully, Amiya won't lose her teaching job. And maybe they can find a way to have a relationship. They sound GREAT together!
Please Update SOOOOOOOOOON..............................
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2013 11:09 pm
Love the cast pics.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2013 06:51 am
Umm yes!! I love Matt Bomer. I love this story. Please update soon. :)
Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2013 05:50 am
Okay I suck . I don't know what took me so long to read this Kick Ass good story . Love it !!!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 28 2013 05:37 am
OHWEEE!!! I swear on my brand new pet kitten that's exactly how I pictured homegirl girl. And Pierce is YUMMY! I'm ready for more, you got yourself a new fan!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2013 04:31 am
OMG that was amazeballs!! pLease more *screams*lol
Author's Response:
This actually made me laugh out loud. Thank you! I'm incredibly humbled.
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2013 08:46 pm
I love it! You got me wanting to put on my freakum dress and go get laid! Hell, I'm in NYC, it shouldn't be too hard, lol.
Author's Response:
Go girl, go!
Reviewer: Angie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2013 12:39 am
You're kidding right? One shot? No lady, this is the beginning of a great story. So whenever you're ready...continue. Please and thank you. :)
Author's Response:
Aw thank you so much! I made it a one shot because I'm insecure about my writing. I don't know how I am with longevity. But your words give me fuel. Perhaps there will be more...
Reviewer: SF69 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2013 12:03 am
love it more of this story more soon
Author's Response:
I'll try...
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 10:30 pm
FANTSASTIC story! Is there going to be a sequel?!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 08:21 pm
This was good. OMG the cell phone...
Author's Response:
I'm a fan of your stories so this means a lot.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 07:43 pm