No need for a warning it was great! For a first timer I thought you did extremly well. You can take this story so far and to so many different places. Good luck and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I've been a silent reader for a while, initimidated by all the juicy goodness on here. But you guys sure know how to make a girl feel good.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 05:55 pm
HOLY SHIT! That was HOT and I loved EVERY WORD OF IT. please please PLEASE continue this story!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 07:02 am
omgee. I'm speechless. Who will get the call? She is completely screwed. *pun intended*
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 04:20 am
Is good sex with hot man worth lossing your job? I can't figure a cell connects without someone pressing the answer key? Are you posting cast pictures? Me likely more please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 02:18 am
GOOD JESUS!! This can't be a one-hitta quitta?! Please don't let it be that! This was so freakinfrakin GOOD! Thank you for blessing us with this marvelous debut! Now bless us with MORE!
Author's Response:
HUGE fan of yours, Elizablu (among many other marvelous writers on this site). I consider it an honor that you reviewed. Thank you. I'll do my best to give you guys the goods.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 01:04 am
This was really good! Would have never know it was your first story! How can we inspire you to keep this storying going? :)
Reviewer: Eboinwm Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 12:36 am
GREAT!!!!
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 11:46 pm
Wait now!!! What!!! That's it...I loved it and want.more. great story
Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 10:55 pm
This was an amazing story from beginning to end. I must say I know that Amiya is Pierce's teach but damn they are consenting adults and I think Amiya needs Pierce to loosen her up a little she needs to be able to have someone to go home too even if its her very sexy student. I don't think she will let their "sexual" relationship interfer with how she grades and teaches him. That was some hot scenes. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 10:37 pm
Dam that was hot. I think I need a smoke after reading this. Pierce knows how to treat a lady body. But once they find out about the open line drama going to hit the fan. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 09:52 pm
Dam that was hot. I think I need a smoke after reading this. Pierce knows how to treat a lady body. But once they find out about the open line drama going to hit the fan. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 09:52 pm
I wonder who is in the other side of the phone. I thinking maybe his dad, mom or one of his friends.
Reviewer: PrettyinBlue08 Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 09:22 pm
Oh Shit!!! Who's phone is that and who's number is it dialing???
You have to continue this or do another one shot..
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 08:31 pm
First story wouldnt have guessed wow that was just wow!!!.. I need a cig damn that was way hottt. Shoo man oh wait i dnt even smoke lol thats just how good that was!!
Reviewer: Hawtgurl Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 06:51 pm
I so LOVED the build up. Sometimes, they can be just as hot as the sex scene....or even hotter....depending on how its written...and you wrote it so well. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 06:26 pm
You definitely can't make it a one-shot ! It's too good to be ended, I really enjoyed it, really well written. You did well, please continue this story !
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 04:59 pm
This was very well-written but a one-shot?? Definitely not with that ending! please have a heart and continue
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 04:37 pm
A one-shot?!? Noooooooooo(screamed tragically)! Please continue the story.
Reviewer: Viv Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 04:20 pm