Reviews For Office Hours
Title: The Office

No need for a warning it was great! For a first timer I thought you did extremly well. You can take this story so far and to so many different places. Good luck and I can't wait to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I've been a silent reader for a while, initimidated by all the juicy goodness on here. But you guys sure know how to make a girl feel good.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 05:55 pm

Title: The Office

HOLY SHIT! That was HOT and I loved EVERY WORD OF IT. please please PLEASE continue this story!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 07:02 am

Title: The Office

omgee. I'm speechless. Who will get the call? She is completely screwed. *pun intended*

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 04:20 am

Title: The Office

Is good sex with hot man worth lossing your job?  I can't figure a cell connects without someone pressing the answer key?  Are you posting cast pictures? Me likely more please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 02:18 am

Title: The Office

GOOD JESUS!! This can't be a one-hitta quitta?! Please don't let it be that! This was so freakinfrakin GOOD! Thank you for blessing us with this marvelous debut! Now bless us with MORE!



Author's Response:

HUGE fan of yours, Elizablu (among many other marvelous writers on this site). I consider it an honor that you reviewed. Thank you. I'll do my best to give you guys the goods.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 01:04 am

Title: The Office

This was really good! Would have never know it was your first story! How can we inspire you to keep this storying going? :)

Reviewer: Eboinwm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 12:36 am

Title: The Office

GREAT!!!!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 11:46 pm

Title: The Office

Wait now!!! What!!! That's it...I loved it and want.more. great story

Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 10:55 pm

Title: The Office

This was an amazing story from beginning to end. I must say I know that Amiya is Pierce's teach but damn they are consenting adults and I think Amiya needs Pierce to loosen her up a little she needs to be able to have someone to go home too even if its her very sexy student. I don't think she will let their "sexual" relationship interfer with how she grades and teaches him. That was some hot scenes. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 10:37 pm

Title: The Office

Dam that was hot. I think I need a smoke after reading this. Pierce knows how to treat a lady body. But once they find out about the open line drama going to hit the fan. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 09:52 pm

Title: The Office

Dam that was hot. I think I need a smoke after reading this. Pierce knows how to treat a lady body. But once they find out about the open line drama going to hit the fan. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 09:52 pm

Title: The Office

I wonder who is in the other side of the phone. I thinking maybe his dad, mom or one of his friends.

Reviewer: PrettyinBlue08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 09:22 pm

Title: The Office

Oh Shit!!! Who's phone is that and who's number is it dialing???

You have to continue this or do another one shot..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 08:31 pm

Title: The Office

First story wouldnt have guessed wow that was just wow!!!.. I need a cig damn that was way hottt. Shoo man oh wait i dnt even smoke lol thats just how good that was!!

Reviewer: Hawtgurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 06:51 pm

Title: The Office

I so LOVED the build up. Sometimes, they can be just as hot as the sex scene....or even hotter....depending on how its written...and you wrote it so well. I look forward to reading more of your work. 

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 06:26 pm

Title: The Office

You definitely can't make it a one-shot ! It's too good to be ended, I really enjoyed it, really well written. You did well, please continue this story !

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 04:59 pm

Title: The Office

This was very well-written but a one-shot?? Definitely not with that ending! please have a heart and continue 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 04:37 pm

Title: The Office

A one-shot?!? Noooooooooo(screamed tragically)! Please continue the story.

Reviewer: Viv Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2013 04:20 pm



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