Glad to see you back! I love this story and can't wait to see where it goes. Curious about why he won't just do what he needs to do if she is the one he wants to be with. Update soon!!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: May 19 2023 12:17 pm
OMG, I just saw you updated! I'm so freaking excited! I can't wait to see how things play out for these two idiots. I absolutely love all your writing!!!
Reviewer: nikkerbocker23 Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2023 09:41 pm
A story thats too close to home.
Please dont stop writing it.
I hope Charley has a better ending than me.
Reviewer: marmus Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 29 2023 03:11 am
Nice update
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Date: January 24 2023 01:50 pm
Well, damn Charley. Rider you're a fool, that woman finally opened up to you and you're scared. What a coward!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: January 23 2023 06:39 pm
They did the do and she still won't open her mouth to yell him how she feels.
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Date: January 23 2023 06:25 pm
Why doesn't Charley just tell Rider how she feels?
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Date: January 23 2023 06:18 pm
Rider did care about Charley.
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Date: January 23 2023 06:08 pm
That was cute she met his mom.
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Date: January 23 2023 05:58 pm
Charley has a crush but Rider has a girlfriend. Would Rider date a sister?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: January 23 2023 05:48 pm
This is a cute story!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: January 23 2023 05:34 pm
This is such amazing amazing story! I really hope you update this sometime because you really are amazingly talented!
Reviewer: Nimi Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 15 2015 07:37 am
I really miss this story
Reviewer: PaperRoses Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2015 07:20 am
Gah! This is soooo brilliant! I do hope you come back to your stories...you're a fantastic writer!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed




Date: November 25 2015 08:04 am
This is amazing! These characters are officially my favorite on the planet. Can Lisa be my mom too?
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed




Date: June 09 2015 02:58 am
I rediscovered this story. So well written, the build up is great. I don't usually support pregnancy plots but in this case, the situation I very realistic. I hope you will be able to continue this wonderful gem at some point.
Reviewer: PaperRoses Signed [Report This]Date: May 09 2015 11:24 pm
Still no update?! Come back!
Reviewer: teaukeri Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2014 10:51 am
You are now in my top 2 favorite writers on this website! You and Penny88 really do have gifts.
This story is amazing. I love the foundation you laid down before getting to the sex and you let it build up a little bit like foreplay and I think that's one of your strengths. Please update soon! I'm in love with these characters and this story, period. I first read it a few weeks ago and when I came back today to re-read it I realized I hadn't left a review!
Reviewer: teaukeri Signed




Date: April 14 2014 05:36 am
Good Lawrd. The sexual tension was worth it. I can't wait to see what happens, Charley is such an interesting character.
Reviewer: monsgors Signed




Date: March 05 2014 09:55 pm
Brilliant update! Can't wait for the next one, soon I hope!!a86;
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed




Date: March 05 2014 03:21 am
Finally!!! It's been so long, but this update was good! Okay, even though Ryder pissed me off missing Charley's birthday. Obviously he's either gonna regret them sleeping together or feel he has to stay with his girlfriend since Charley is alone and pregnant at the beginning?! Ok, I need to know what's going on and quickly please!! :) They are perfect for each other, he just needs to realize it. Great update.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed




Date: March 03 2014 09:46 pm
Hottest chapter i have ever read in my life and believe me that's saying something. Keep up the amazing writing, this story has me laughing out loud, feeling charley's pain and checking the chamber constantly for updates. geat job!
Reviewer: Jinrey9023 Signed [Report This]Date: March 03 2014 04:21 am
Yay! I love this story. The push and pull between two people with amazing chemistry with so much lying beneath the surface. Sex is meant to be passionate, and passion comes from security and love. You illustrated that perfectly. He is in love with her but for some reason it just is not happening for them. Charley, I respect the fact that she resisted. She caved but she at least recognized he had someone. Which begs the question: what is going on with him? Im really curious. Part of me believes he saw her that night, then left.
Thank you for the update.
Reviewer: PaperRoses Signed [Report This]Date: March 02 2014 11:27 pm
Great update and I do feel for Charley, but she will be ok with the baby--at least she will have a piece of him to love. Rider cares for her, but I can't get a bead on him. Seems he only thinks of her when she is right there in front of him. He didn't even hold the door for her and she noticed, but during sex he treated her tenderly, like he cared.
I wouldn't be surprise if he was insenstive enough to send her a wedding invite, and she should reciprocate with a birth announcement.
Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed




Date: March 02 2014 11:21 pm
I feel so bad for Charley. Rider can't even make it for her birthday when she has been there for all of his events, birthdays and invitations and he can't show up on her birthday. Then goad her into pretty much putting her feelings on the table with nothing from him but physical at this time. I am guessing you are close to merging the past with the future since she is I am guessing pregnant after this interlude. No condoms were worn. They both are emotionally a wreck and can't simply speak about their feelings. Rider with his constant mixed signals would be a headache for me and I would have to cut him out of my life because of that. As long as she is holding out for him, she won't find anyone else and unfortunately this has sealed him upon her heart. Wonder how Rider felt during this.
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Date: March 02 2014 08:51 pm