This chapter, this whole story, are top-notch. Fully invested in the story and its characters. Excellent writing and thank you for updating! Please update agiains,soon!Reviewer: Lemon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 18 2023 02:44 am
A story thats too close to home.
Please dont stop writing it.
I hope Charley has a better ending than me.Reviewer: marmus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29 2023 03:11 am
I rediscovered this story. So well written, the build up is great. I don't usually support pregnancy plots but in this case, the situation I very realistic. I hope you will be able to continue this wonderful gem at some point.Reviewer: PaperRoses Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 11:24 pm
Finally!!! It's been so long, but this update was good! Okay, even though Ryder pissed me off missing Charley's birthday. Obviously he's either gonna regret them sleeping together or feel he has to stay with his girlfriend since Charley is alone and pregnant at the beginning?! Ok, I need to know what's going on and quickly please!! :) They are perfect for each other, he just needs to realize it. Great update.Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 09:46 pm
Yay! I love this story. The push and pull between two people with amazing chemistry with so much lying beneath the surface. Sex is meant to be passionate, and passion comes from security and love. You illustrated that perfectly. He is in love with her but for some reason it just is not happening for them. Charley, I respect the fact that she resisted. She caved but she at least recognized he had someone. Which begs the question: what is going on with him? Im really curious. Part of me believes he saw her that night, then left.
Thank you for the update.Reviewer: PaperRoses Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 11:27 pm
I feel so bad for Charley. Rider can't even make it for her birthday when she has been there for all of his events, birthdays and invitations and he can't show up on her birthday. Then goad her into pretty much putting her feelings on the table with nothing from him but physical at this time. I am guessing you are close to merging the past with the future since she is I am guessing pregnant after this interlude. No condoms were worn. They both are emotionally a wreck and can't simply speak about their feelings. Rider with his constant mixed signals would be a headache for me and I would have to cut him out of my life because of that. As long as she is holding out for him, she won't find anyone else and unfortunately this has sealed him upon her heart. Wonder how Rider felt during this.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 08:51 pm
Wow that was everything I never expected to happen in this chapter. I thought you would tease us for a while longer. The ending quote breaks my heart dude Charley deserves better than what I expect to happen. Shit...Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 08:41 pm
Beautiful story so far. I do believe tha Rider loves Charley, but he is afraid to voice his feeling to her.Reviewer: sandra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2013 05:45 am
She needs to open up to Rider. I thought he broke up with Allison or maybe I just assumed that ?! Anyway, I like the bit of backstory so we know why she's reluctant to tell him how she feels, but I want her to say something. She could even do something...kiss him, he wanted to. She kissed the idiot in the bathroom easily. I just think they could be perfect together, but anyway good story!!Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2013 10:06 am