Reviews For UnRequited
Title: In the beginning...

Definitely an interesting start that makes me want to read more. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2013 09:41 am

Title: And She Wept

It's so good to see this story back. It keeps getting better and I keep hoping that Ryder will get a clue. But this chapter shed alot of light on Charley's character. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 27 2013 05:32 am

Title: And She Wept

Is Rider suppose to be a mind reader and know that Charli is in love with him?  I know that his girlfriend Alison knows how she feels.



Author's Response:

Charley's never met Alison, but I'm sure GFs have some sort of intuition if that's what you mean. We also don't know to what extent Rider has spoken to Alison about Charley. That's intentional. It doesn't matter if Alison actually knows or not, it's about Charley's process.

I do agree though. Rider's not a mind reader, but he's also not stupid. He's been sending flashes of some pretty strange signals as well.

I hope the next chapter gives you a bit more insight and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2013 04:48 am

Title: The First Supper

Ok this is a good story too. You are so talented.  Your stories pull me in and make me care about the characters.  Its a real good story.  Update this please!!! Thanks

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 25 2013 08:16 am

Title: The First Supper

Thanks for a great update. I am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 01:32 am

Title: The Parting

Thanks for a great update. I liked Riders. Mom.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 01:18 am

Title: And Then There Was Light...

To bad their friendship ended in a bad way and now Charley is choosing to be a single mother. I like the way that you are building their friendship. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 12:32 am

Title: In the beginning...

I like the start to the story. They have City Year everywhere. I like the fact that Charley and Ryder both belong to it. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 12:17 am

Title: The First Supper

love it

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 08:27 pm

Title: The First Supper

I've beeeeeeeen waiting for this update and it was everything I thought it would beb25;¨q4;. Please, oh pretty please, don't make us wait too long for the next one!!!

Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 12:48 am

Title: The Parting

I absolutely love this story. I feel for Chuck but Ryder hasn't really crossed any lines. I love the character development and the pace. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you! Love your work as well.

And as for the lines...eh, they both haven't crossed any obvious lines but this grey area that they're lurking in is dangerous. Why doesn't Alison (the elephant in the room) ever exist between the two? I mean Chuck thinks about it, but only for a moment and then it's swept away by her lust. Rider doesn't really offer up any news on that front either.

But your comment makes me think and re-evaluate. Hopefully, the next chapter will bring more clarity. THANKS AGAIN.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 11:47 pm

Title: The First Supper

This is soo good and real. Please update frequently.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 08:50 pm

Title: The First Supper

I really like this story.. I'm happy to see that it's back.

Reviewer: Elston4018 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 06:52 am

Title: The First Supper

So happy for the update. This is such wonderful writing.I want to encourage you further, you are talented. Love the angst and chemistry.

Reviewer: paperroses Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 06:03 am

Title: The First Supper

Extremely beautiful story, I can feel how deep their friendship/connection is.Your story is really well built. Great job, I eager to re d more !

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 02:05 am

Title: The First Supper

Rider us still an asshole I see. Will they run into each while she's pregnant or will Chuck be pushing s stroller to the nearest park when Rider sees her?  



Author's Response:

I want to hate on Rider, too. I'm hoping that in the next chapter we might see some redeeming qualities.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2013 01:30 am

Title: The Parting

I like the idea of next chapter being in Ryder's pov. I think he feels a lot more for Chuck than she realizes.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2013 04:00 pm

Title: The Parting

aww hopefully they'll be a couple

Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2013 08:04 pm

Title: In the beginning...

more!

Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2013 08:03 pm

Title: The Parting

I liike this story. I can't wait til Rye finds out about the baby.

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2013 07:14 pm

Title: And Then There Was Light...

Aww I love it :-) really can't wait to read more

& see where their relationship goes. 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 01:31 pm

Title: And Then There Was Light...

It seems like they have a great friendship. Unfortunately, that's all it is for him. He even calls her "Chuck". I'm interested to see how their one night together came about. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 12:15 pm

Title: And Then There Was Light...

I am getting the impression that she knew about the girlfriend before they had sex or am I mistaken?  Is her decision not to tell him about the baby about her not wanting to destroy his relationship with Allison or about her punishing him?  Tell him and say that we don't need you. He's bound to find out because one these days he will come to visit her. At least I hope that he will. Good but confusing update!



Author's Response:

sorry i never responded to this. you raise some intriguing/important questions. Charley would never punish Rider. She "loves" him too much for that. She thinks she's protecting him and his relationship with Alison. She did know about his girlfriend when they slept together, but the details of that night will reveal why she did it anyways. We're getting there...stick with me. :)

 

Also, you may be right. Maybe he will come visit her and find out. If he does that will be one the only blatant acts of love & some sort of commitment that he's ever her post-summer. As alluded to at the end of the latest chapter, Rider becomes a flake.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 05:42 am

Title: In the beginning...

I like it a lot so far.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 03:39 am

Title: In the beginning...

A summer to remember for both of them looks like, or one to forget.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 01 2013 09:24 pm



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