Thank you so much for updating this story! It's, by far, my favorite story on the site. I can relate to these flawed charecters and that makes them so much more real. Please don't keep us waiting too long for an update. I can't wait to see what happens next!

If Peter got mysteriously hit by a car... I wouldn't be surprised. He is legitimately an awful person. 

When are you going to update? Pls, soon, I hope!

Well. that sucks....it takes forever to get a book published doesn't it?  I've already been waiting since peppie was a pup...Lol   Oh well, what you can do? Just keep me posted so I can buy it. I hope after you publish it you get a movie offer.  Best wishes for your success with this story.  What  about the  other story. I'm waiting on an update for that one too.

Please don't tell me this story is abandoned?

Idk how long I've been waiting for this update and it was well worth the wait too omg I'm still I'm shocked at Henry's confession about being in love with Val but it pissed me off that he's so mad at her for showing up with another man when he clearly ignored her for months Wtf Henry ! Nonetheless I freaking love the update I'm so anxious and greedy for me !

I maybe  the only reader who loves Henry still.   I am paying attention to the bits and peices you exposed about his past and that makes me love him.  When you revealed his fiance cheated on him with his best friend, I knew he had trust issues. When he talked about how his father just left them and he had to step up and try to take care of his mother and siblings,that scarred him.   Being homeless and now finding out he was beaten within an inch of his life.  I'm sorry but I'm pro Henry.  

The thing that  makes me check the website for this story almost everyday is the contrast between Henry and Valarie.  Everyone  wants to be with Henry. His personality just draws you to him. On the other hand, Val is a bit withdrawn because of her past weight problem and not being accepted, but somehow when the two of them are together the relationship works.  You can see he  cared about her and it was refreshing to hear him say it. I was so glad that Val went after him.  It so strange to me when people have feelings for someone and mss out on the one thing that the majority of the population wants ....to be truly loved, because they are too afraid to express their true feelings.

I hope they talk and really put their feelings out there. He has already exposed himself.  It took Chase's antagoniizing behind to push Henry over the edge.  Even when he was out of control, I was a hundred percent on his side.  How  do get to be so arrogant that you can just call someone stupid and think it's okay.  Henry already wanted to kick his behind for being with Valarie. I was glad he let Chase know  he was  seconds away from an ass whipping.

I could  go on and on about the things that I love about  this story and your writing, but I don't want you to spend a lot of time reading  reviews, while  we  are impatiently waiting for the next  update.  Good thing you re not a dealer because you got me hooked.

You know, there are few stories that really move me. I mean I love to read well-written stories. Get inspired by them, entertained by them, but few actually move me. I don't know what it is about these characters Val-erie and Henry Walker that I really just connect with. So real, so emotional, so human.

This chapter flowed beautifully and it was such a relief to see Henry FINALLY crack. He's been such an unaffected happy-go-lucky live in the moment mysterious sexy man. His behavior has been really disconnected, when he's with Valerie he's completely in, completely into her and just dreamy, but then he just disappears. Asshole... but charming enough to woo us back and make us fall in love with him again. Exhausting.

All this time we focussed on Valerie and her obvious issues and never looked at the secrets Henry Walker carries. This story, the Henry Walker character has been the best character development I've ever read in a story. I love how Valerie is a better position now (probably because she's already gotten help, via therapist, to tackle her issues) to help him. I really really love how the whole scene unfolded, how Peter ended up having a much bigger role in this story. It's funny how Peter and Ella both have these broken people in their lives, with such deep issues that's really very draining, but they never gave up on them. The best display of love and loyalty for family.

Ah... I love this freaking story!

The VERY best thing is seeing un update and the very worst thing is realizing you've finished reading the chapter. And then having to wait so long for an update. I know I'm the worst at having my readers wait for an update :(, so I get it, but I that doesn't mean I have to like it! Lol :) Please update soon, begging unashamedly over here. Lol

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WOW, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3 <3 <3

First off, I hope all is well with you.

Second, if so, GIRL PLEASE UPDATE.

Third, if not, we, your loyal readers, understand. Sending good thoughts in your direction.

Waiting for an update like a crackhead in need of a fix.  -click- -click- -refresh-