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Title: Prologue

I love well rounded characters! Henry is a grown up Harry Styles! Great dig at the fans and fics! I love this story for the simplicity and complexities. Val needs to stand but she needs someone to stand with her. Henry is so unselfish, loving, and he legitimately cares about her. I literally screamed when I saw the update. 

 

 

 Reviewer: PaperRoses Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 04:41 am
Title: Prologue

yeahh imma need an update ASAP. I love this story

 Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 06:32 pm
Title: Prologue

I get so excited every time I see an update for this story. You are amazing and this story has me so hooked. I look forward a bunch to the next installment.

 

P.S. I NEED THEM TOGETHER!!!! -gross sobbing in a corner-

 Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 05:27 am
Title: Prologue

Wow, a month?!  Whats up with that?  Looking forward to the next submission. Please update soon :). 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 05:07 am
Title: Prologue

Can we get an update! !??! :)))

 Reviewer: britt Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 11:16 pm
Title: Prologue

I just reread chap 11..ummmm can we have a repeatlol I cant wait for the update

 Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2013 10:49 am
Title: Prologue

All I thought about was Brandy's song PUT IT DOWN!!! lol Or maybe Kelly's song.  LOL I need to turn the fan on!!lol

 Reviewer: Sassy20 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 02:24 pm
Title: Prologue

Well Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 07:47 am
Title: Prologue

I am Dead and Gone. I loved this interaction between Val and Henry. I love that they're so open with each other and Henry's so endearing and praiseful. And him going down on her.... I have no words.

 Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 03:18 am
Title: Prologue

So cute...Henry is just so awesome.Love this update.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2013 01:48 pm
Title: Prologue

Ok... Ok so I'll admit it. Soooo I don't where in the hell I've been, that I didn't see this story until now. Annnd here's my confession:

I started your story yesterday and could NOT put it down until the wee hours of this morning. Lol And now I'm walking around like a zombie because of the lack of sleep. hahaha It's just that good. I LOVE your dialogue, the light banter between the characters is very real and funny. The inner dialogue is at times unsettling but very real, interesting and funny.

Your characters are sooo believable and not cookie cutter and just so interesting to me. Your descriptions are very smooth and deep. Valerie's issues and insecurities opens up the fear and problem that a lot of us have to deal with... those little voices of insecurity that crawl into and then nest in our brain.

I can't stop saying awesome things about this story. I just hope to see an update soon because I'm biting my fingernails and I'm afraid I've developed a bit of an addiction to it. Lol dramatic much?! Well maybe some of Val..erie has rubbed off on me. Oh lord, did that just rhyme? :/

-p2p-



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 Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 09:33 pm
Title: Prologue

Absolutly love this! For some reason i imagine harry styles as Henry! Can not wait to see how things turn out!

 Reviewer: Lucy_william Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 05:10 am
Title: Prologue

I don't know how I missed this gem.  I love your writing style.   I'm so glad Henry has gotten under Val's skin.  I look forward to the next update!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 12:47 pm
Title: Prologue

Ready to find out about her secret.  What is up with Peter and Ella?  Those two are up to something, and Henry, although he may not be involved, knows what it is. 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 02:16 am
Title: Prologue

This is so cute it hurts. And it's so well humored and written. I'm really loving every single update. I don't want Val to lose this one. He's a true gem

 Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 09:08 am
Title: Prologue

Hmmmm...this looks interesting.  

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 02:30 am
Title: Prologue

I also have that same feeling, even after reading this beginning for a 2nd time, Peter and Henry are working together to get her out Peter's way. 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 05:58 pm
Title: Prologue

Why do i have this feeling that Peter and Henry are running game on Val? Henry can get her out the way so Peter can have more time with his girl.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2013 07:43 am
Title: Prologue

sounds interesting

 Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 04:45 pm
Title: Prologue

There's a struggle within her from the start. Looks interesting.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 04:12 pm
Title: Prologue

Very nice! 

 Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 02:58 pm
Title: Prologue

Very interesting start...can't wait to read more...so many questions...

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 02:32 pm
Title: Prologue

That was freaking hot!  I need me a Henry.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 02:18 pm
Title: Prologue

I'm hooked already! What a strong start.

 Reviewer: Raven Frost Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 09:20 am
Title: Prologue

Great start...Please give us more

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 08:21 am


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