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Title: Chapter 1

I can definately relate Val issues....

Sweet Heaven that ending

 Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 12:51 am
Title: Chapter 1

If it's the USF that I think it is then GO BULLS!! m/

Im liking the start of this story!! I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

 Reviewer: Kay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 04:01 am
Title: Chapter 1

SO I just started reading and OMG I am so Valerie...and then that last line in Chapt 1 by Henry...whoa sounds familiar.

 

Going back to reading now...loving it so far! 

 Reviewer: SnoopiBabi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2014 05:02 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Hot Prologue and I loved the 1st time they met yes, her self-esteem is a bit low.  I hope she is able to work that out or henry is aboe to work it out for her. *smile*

Thank you for sharing.  I am glad i found this story.

Happy writing.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 08:44 pm
Title: Chapter 1

How could I have missed ths little gem. Ahh I hope her self esteem grows.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 05:14 am
Title: Chapter 1

So I am curently sitting in the USF library reading this summer so I defintly lmbo when i read USF graudtaion ... ARE U A  BULL???



Author's Response:

this is so crazy lol. at first i thought you left a review to the wrong story. i completely made up the name of a college with San Francisco in mind. i didn't even think about the actual USF college. No I'm not a bull, sorry lol.

 Reviewer: auzirus1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 04:48 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter

 Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 05:30 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love Henry, Peter is an ahold!  Ella is cool peoples!  I think that Henry will be good for Val. More please!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 03:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I feel for Valerie...her self-esteem is pretty low and she has no confidence in herself.  Looks like she's been living in the shadow of her beautiful sister for a while and is just content with the status quo. 

Hope Henry is the one to bring her out of her shell and help her start living again...he seems quite persistant so I guess there's hope...

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 02:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter. I like Henry's charm and Val's (valerie) acknowledgement of her issues. 

How does Val look? We got everyone's else's description, but not hers..is it coming up?

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 11:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

Henry wants her

 Reviewer: Bigsix Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2013 09:32 am


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